Well excuse me whilst I stop to contemplate
All the memories that come flooding back
As I ask about your distant days
so far away
From anywhere I ever want to be again,
Caught up in your vicious cycles
And intoxicating promises
That never counted for a thing
but were exchanged for medication and sleep deprivation
(you’re fucking with my head again).
Like watching my life through broken glass
I don’t know when I lost you &&
I'm not sure how much time has passed
It’s been a while since I thought about you
Been so long since I last heard,
A single word
You said to me.
Please be quiet,
I don’t want to remember
I can’t quite concentrate,
(just please give me a second- you’ve thrown me out of sync)
My worlds revolving
In brighter colours than I ever promised I could show you.
Knowing your insecurities inside out
Tells me that you’re lying with your tales of love and
Dedication
Much like the dedication you forgot to commit to me
When I was your world
Back when I called you my girl
But…
I’m holding her in my sleep now
She’s so beautiful and when I look at your photograph
All I can see is the ugly distortion I KNOW lies within
Life’s looking better than it ever did
when we were “together”
&&Now when I think about you
On those rare occasions when I spot something
I’m sure would have made you smile
I can hear HER voice in my head-
What happened to all the I LOVE YOUS?♥
Is his hand warm in yours and do you think about me when you
Touch.
When you
Fuck.
It’s not making LOVE
You wouldn’t know love,
You wouldn’t know trust
You wouldn’t know truth
You only know lust
I’m not affected by this, it doesn’t hurt anymore
I guess it’s just a lesson I've learned
NEVER trust a whore.
Author notes
Anyone who knows me quite well will know what this is about to the personal extent- but i imagine those i don't know will comprehend the meaning of it- if you don't- you're really rather stupid
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Yes,it could be put into a brilliant song...a raw and emotional write..
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Well done I can relate completely.
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*laughs*
it is weird how i can come across something that puts my given situation down to a tee. exes....oi.
either way...a nice purging of the mind. there was a sense of urgency mingled with freedom in this. it had a intensity without seemingly like a rant.
the flow was excellent. my eyes slid down the page.
the only thing i'm finding in this that isn't clicking in my head is this part
-&&Now when I think about you
On those rare occasions when I spot something
I’m sure would have made you smile
I can hear HER voice in my head-
What happened to all the I LOVE YOUS?♥-
it seems misplaced in your thought process. not that it doesn't go with the piece, but for some reason i wasn't wanting that right there.
oi just my two cents anyway.
raw write. sometimes fuck you just isn't enough huh?
-ash
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i love it. intense. i love the way it was broken up. it added to the emotion of the piece. it's really powerful.
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Wow...amazing
Wow...i feel you...sorry that you had to go through that...it sucks when someone that you thought you love puts you through some crap like that...i guess love does that to you though..."love" reciently fucked me over...so in a sense i feel you...this poem has intense emotion...I loved it...keep it up...
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a good poetic piece here which you have penned, very enjoyable, the flow is really good. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Amazing
Wow, very powerful prjection of your emotion. being betrayed stings but it's made for some great poetry here! -
i like it a lot! i liked how it came from a personal point and i could feel the emotion in it!
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awsome
This was a really cool poem.
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I LOVED THIS
The words were so powerful and I can relate
wowowowowow
This is truly amazing
great flow and it seemed very lyrical almost to me
What a powerful emotion filled work of beauty!!
3 cheers for this AWESOME poem
my favorite on AP so far
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O.O Wow. I'm...whoa. Let's just start off by saying this poem is...Powerful? Does that make sense? x] But yeah--I love the legnth. And it's really descriptive...Love it!
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Two sides - two hurt
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awesome
I don't know you, but I well understand the words you have written. I have said them myself to someone before, just maybe not so eloquently. I am glad you are holding someone else now. So am I..someone worth holding. I pray you have love joy and happiness.. Have a wonderful New year!
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Song! xD;
This totally reminded me of a song. You know, had you a band, use these as the lyrics, lmao.
Aaaanwyays, thats pretty awesome, never trust a whore. A lesson we all need?
Its pretty straight forward with the whore stuff XD But otherwise, I think its pretty flippin awesome.
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Shit. This is the single best poem I have read on this site. It is frankly glorious, filled with something that for once isn't self pity. I'm in love with it!
~Love from Alice
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I'm with you on that and I'm sorry you had to go through that it's never good when someone fucks with you, I should know. You did a good job of getting all of your emotions out and this piece is just so intoxicating great write!
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wow. amazing. The emotion was intense. I loved it!
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