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Happiness

I know when I smile from ear to ear
for no specific reason,
that happiness is in the air...

Laughing to myself as I walk up the street
thinking about the night before
when you tickled my back and we sat and ate

You make me feel the most comfortable I've ever felt
as you kiss my neck,
I can barely contain myself!

My legs shake as you lay next to me
we laugh, lost in emotion
it's almost too hard for us to believe

These simple words
feel like the best I've ever written
because they remind me of you
as I'm consumed by these wonderful emotions

Lets take our time and take this slow
I don't want this to end
I don't want you to go

So as I think of you
not really caring, as the pen cotinues to write
you kiss me gently on the cheek
and again, I'm engulfed by your arms...

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  • romanticadventure
    December 11, 2006

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    aww very cute. i like it, its very upbeat. good rhythem, i can imagine fantsaizing and the whole head over heels in love message, is sweet.