It's a Saturday Night
And my mood is right
There is a full moon on the rise
My babies got her hot pants on
She know's they drive me crazy
She can tantalize and mystify
All the men around her
Boy's you better run and hide
My babies loose
She is in a groove
My babies hot
And you know that it's ok
Because my baby
Only love's me
It is a moon lite night
She will prowl all night
I am just, howling at the moon
Say what you will boy, she's still mine
She's just out having some fun
A little bump and grind and doesy doe
Boy we're having fun now
And now who you laughing at
My babies loose
She is in a groove
My babies hot
And you know that it's ok
Because my baby
Only love's me
Author notes
A little fun, May write more latter, Something on the fun side.
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Please tell me what you think
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I was reading through entries for a contest and started to browse poets that I had not read yet - sort of randomly to expand those that I meet on AP through critiques.
At any rate, I came across one of your comments for Myra, then came to your bio page and skimmed titles of your poems to find something on the lighter side to read that would possibly get one more smile out of me before catching some sleep.
This one certainly did just that. It's nice to find another poet on here that doesn't have all of their writing tied up in serious themes. Though they do have their place and respect warranted - there should be a lighter side in writing as well.
Thanks for bringing it here with this piece.
Well done.
Kimmie -
Definitely sounds like a lot of fun to me! Let the good times roll! Great write. Thank you for sharing.
Jeannie
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charlie, another great write! you did a wonderful job with this. it is so light and carefree feeling i can hear the music in my mind and want to groove to the music. keep on writing friend. God bless you
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Hey this is cool, I like it a lot, would make a really catchy song me thinks. Nice job
x take care x
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So much enjoyed the read....so much fun and very provacative....such a great job here...smiles, Terry
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yuk
good honky tonk song material - thats about it - Dobar Dan - Bless God - Joe -
sounds like a song.. i can hear the steel guitars and violins...
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Well aren't we the playful one.
I love this side of you Charlie. You will have all the ladies a flutter. Including me. Wonderful poem, so full of fun and smiles. Just what this world needs more of so keep them coming. 
Look forward to more. You take care my dear friend. Always here for you. Love, Sandy 
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This poem has a very playful tone to it. I wrote something with a similar flavor to it while I was on vacation. They are fun to write and make for a very enjoyable read. Well done.
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Nice one
This is a great easy going poem, showing the lighter side of a relationship.
It has a good flow and was an enjoyable read.
Rosemary -
excellent
A little bump and grind and doesy doe does sound like alot of fun. I can just hear you howling at the moon. As if saying sorry boys about your luck I'm the victor here, cause baby is dancing for me. Very fun up lifting read.
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Very sexy indeed, Bella
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