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It's How I Feel

Empty...
That's how I feel without you.
Every day that we are apart
feels like an eternity.

You move me...
make me feel things I thought I would never feel again.
When I am talking to you,
I feel a warmth wash over me.
A warmth unlike any I have felt before.
It picks me up and carries me to a far off place--
a beautiful place--
a place where nothing is known but love and caring.
My worries fade to a distant memory,
and all but you is forgotten,
if only for the moment.
My heart is overflowing with joy and love
the joy that you bring to me,
and the love that I feel for you.
Never have I come across anyone like you:
Sweet, warm, tender, caring…the list is endless.

Lost...
I become overwhelmed in your presence.
Lost in my imagination to the thought of you.
I'm lost in a wonderful dream, and I never want to wake up.

You...
You are too good to be true.
A super hero come to save my life.
The man I've been searching for.
The man of my dreams.
And now I have you,
Yet I cannot have you.
To see you would be heavenly,
to touch you, divine.
I want to share my life with you.

You are my waking thought
and the last thing on my mind
as I drift off to sleep at night.
You fill my dreams with visions of happiness and love,
images that linger on and carry me through my day.

There is a longing in my heart
that someday we will become a reality.
I want you with every fiber of my being.
I need you as I need water, or food, or air.
I miss you every second of every day.
And for everything that you are to me,
everything that you will ever be,
I love you...

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  • bittertears
    January 21, 2007
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    Awesome poem!

  • DenversLostSoul
    December 15, 2006
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    Again, Good!

    Did you send this to him? Was just wondering. Its good. I love you Sam!!
  • Scorpio Girl
    December 11, 2006
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    I don't know why you think this needs to be edited, it sounds great like it is. Very intense, very emotional. My computor is still not letting me leave comments at home. I've been reading your poems and I really like them. Keep up the good work. ((hugs))


  • El Pescador
    December 11, 2006
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    You have been reading my mind.

    I won't make the same assumption as last time (so sorry). These are more or less the sentiments that have run through my mind in the past few days, but you have made a better job of it - Thanks, Peter