It's awkward these days, and the feelings just won't fade.
I don't want to see you anymore, please go away.
I don't want to love you, I don't want my heart to ache.
Can't we go back to the way we were, just like yesterday?
How long has it been, since I've seen your face
Or the smile that's in your eyes when I see you each day
I don't want to love you, you're not good for me
But my heart's not listening, I can't stop anything
My requited love...
Author notes
Ummm, the story behind this poem is kinda cliche you could say. I've liked this guy since seventh grade, i'm in ninth now and he's in tenth, but we don't talk to eachother anymore. I don't want to like him, but I do, even though I know he does stupid stuff. I guess that's what I'm feeling at the moment, because I just let it out here, lol.
Option: 2 write about a love you want but can't have.
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Wonderful
this is realy good one of my favs so far. Kepp up all the good work.
maddie
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Wow i like this a lot. I like the flow and i like how you made it really short but powerful. I know how it feels to know you shouldnt be with someone or like someone but yet your hear wont listen to you. It sucks sometimes but sometimes it can turn out good. great write thank you so much for entering my contest.
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Great.
I love this poem. I've had the same feeling before. Well... still going on... been hurt really bad and still love them and don't kno why. I don't want to but I do... just keep telling myself I hate them though. I love this write it's really fantastic keep up the good writing
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
I DIDN'T REALIZE YOU WERE SO YOUNG FROM THIS WRITING. YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB EXPRESSING YOUR FEELING AND I RELATED TO THIS. I HAVE FELT THE SAME FEELING LONG AGO. YOU JUST CAN'T CONTROL THE FEELINGS IN YOUR HEART.
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this was good. i loved how it flows and i have been there not wanting to love someone but yet its all you can think of nice job! thank you for entering my contest.
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BEAUTIFUL
STUNNING SIMPLY STUNNING
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Thank you very much
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When I was Seventeen
We all go through these awkward stages in development. I was awkward and stupid as a boy; hence the title above, "when I was seventeen, it was a very good year!" (Tks Frank Sinatra) But as a man grows in wisdom and stature, he puts away childish things. Fortunate the young woman, who if her love is strong enough; and patient enough, can help to groom him into his manhood and create the most blessed of relationships; husband and wife! Not all teenage love affairs end badly, some blossom. I married a girl from high school, many years after we had graduated. It worked out ok. We have three sons and 7 grandchildren. Of whom I am most proud. You currently have a love/hate relationship as your poem indicates and your notes too; so patience my young friend. Love endures forever. For what it's worth department. Walt.
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Thank you for your advice and I'll take it to heart.
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This is amazing! I love this. I know exactly how you feel. I'm kinda in the same situation. So I kinda know how you feel. Great write. Thanks for entering and best of luck. ♥
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Thanks, it's just hard you know? That you like someone so much, but either you don't know if they like you back or they don't like you at all? This guy, no matter how impossible it seems, makes me want to go to school even if I just see him in the hallways for a second and in lunch for a little while. I love him, but I hate him for it too.
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you have done a wonderful job of expressing feelings you wish you didn't have but do, its hard I know, been there before myself Bella.
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Thank you, and i'm glad to know that I'm not the only one out there going through this.
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