A Christmas Gift by Dusty Rose at All poetry

Lights twinkle from the tree so bright

scents of cinnamon fill the air so light

here under the mistletoe I stand

waiting for your lips and delicate hands

A present for you, I've been saving

so I hope you've been good and not misbehaving

for over soft skin so fair

It's only a big red bow that I wear

A gift to unwrap gentle and slow

bringing about a passionate glow

A gift that needs a little care

the gift of me is what I share

I'm dreaming of a sensual Christmas without flair

just you and I together, a perfect pair

this gift I give to you the perfect Christmas toy

bringing you happines, love, and a whole lot of joy

Bells will be ringing in your ears tonight

kissing you softly, in your ear I whisper so quiet

fingers tracing over your body ever so slight

filling your senses with Christmas delight

Come morning you'll find more presents

beneath the tree..............

or you can stay here snuggled up

receiving the gift of me

MERRY CHRISTMAS

Author notes

Merry Christmas

In a list

sensual • next in list

A contest entry

another whatever you come up with by ohdavey2008. 600 points, ended December 12, 2006, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A VERY MERRY AND KINKY CHRISTMAS by Swtpoetryman. 1000 points, ended January 4, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Swtpoetryman
December 22, 2008

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THANKS FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST! I ENJOYED JERKING TO THIS!
Bells will be ringing in your ears tonight

And in many other places, too - spending the night with a lady like you - sweet and sensual - to the taste and the touch - and for such a kinky gift I thank you so much! I wonder what toys are awaiting a naughty boy like me under the Christmas Tree, Baby! Everyone can submit three entries - so perhaps I'll find out - in another piece before this kinky contest cums to an end.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
raggyann
August 14, 2007

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this is precious
i adore this beauty
i would clap but have no points
but i realy loved this poem
OctoberCrush
April 13, 2007
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I love the correlation betweent he two...
and the flow was nice.
Good write***
- Dusty Rose
  April 13, 2007
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  Thanks so very much...
  
  Dusty
DolphinLass
March 19, 2007
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well written, lovely poem thanks for sharing
- Dusty Rose
  March 20, 2007
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  Tank you so very much
Matt Holck
February 21, 2007

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you constantly return to a soft touch

fill the air so light
gentle and slow
I whisper so quiet
ever so slight

this defines the voice well in the movement
- Dusty Rose
  February 21, 2007
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  Thanks so very much.. I appreciate it..
  
  Dusty
My Darkness
February 21, 2007

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i can see why you won! this is so good! i am really enjoying all your work, you are so talented! keep up the great work!!!! and thanks for sharing!
plainoljoe
December 28, 2006

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if Christmas was like this, I'd NEVER get out of the bed. You have a gift that deserves being played with everyday. Thanks for the uplift, Dusty the satyr
Iohagh
December 21, 2006

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Xmas pie oh my...
Darling

Dripping beard so wet
gurgled screams oh my
from lapping his pet.
Santa's had Xmas pie.

Smoosh

Janet
- Dusty Rose
  December 21, 2006
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  Thank You Janet
  I appreciate you
  
  much love.. Dusty
Pyragus
December 19, 2006

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Merry Christmas Indeed. I want to give someone a presant like this ...hehehehehehe. Well done, I can never write about christmas you did a great job I like your imagination it heads the same way mine does lol.

~kar
- Dusty Rose
  December 19, 2006
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  Thank you
  I appreciate it very much..Merry Christmas!!!
  
  Dusty
BarbiAngelle
December 18, 2006

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Fabulous!!!
Oh how beautifully sensual this is! So gentle, loving, fun and sweet!!!I absolutely love it!! Great write...Excellent read! You Go Girl!!! @};-
- Dusty Rose
  December 18, 2006
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  Thank you BarbiAngelle
  I appreciate that ever so much... Glad to see you back on here thank you again
  much love....Dusty
Bedroom Eyes
December 16, 2006

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Where's the fire????
OK...now I'm mad. Thanks to you Dusty, my computer screen has melted. The resulting heat ignited a piece of paper that was laying next to the computer. When that went up, it caught the drapes on fire.

I'm sitting at the library computer now to send you this note of thanks for burning my house down. I've already called my lawyer and the insurance company, and they will contact you sometime shortly after the New Year.

Any and all donations either to help rebuild my house, or for my attourney fees, is greatly appreciated. Thanks again Dusty!

Merry F'in Christmas to all

hehehe

HOT HOT HOT WRITE DUSTY!!!!!!!
- Dusty Rose
  December 16, 2006
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  Thank you
  LOL... ..Awww, you are to kind. But I surely appreciate the very nice comment, and applause...Sorry about the house..LOL.. Tell them that I will assist in any way that I can...
  
  Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year!!!!
  
  much love..Dusty..
Closetpoet1971
December 15, 2006

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Very sensual!!
Such an wodnerful write Dusty!! Very romantic!! But I wouldn't expect anything else from my Harlequin romance queen...LOL I really did enjoy reading this one I like the idea of staying snuggled up instead of going to the tree as well!! Loved it my friend!

Much lvoe!
Shannon
- Dusty Rose
  December 15, 2006
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  Thank you Shannon
  I always appreciate it
  I hope that you and your family have a Very Merry Christmas..
  much love to ya....Dusty
sanch011
December 12, 2006
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Congrats on your win
My my how I long for Christmas cheer
- Dusty Rose
  December 12, 2006
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  Thank you
  sanchO11..I appreciate that...just smile....Never fear Christmas cheer is here...Hey that rhymed..Koooooool..No I'm not ..LOL.. just full of it...anyway Merry Christmas, and thanks again...Dusty
ohdavey2008
December 12, 2006

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good job you followed the rules
- Dusty Rose
  December 12, 2006
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  Thank you
  so very much
December 11, 2006

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AWESOME
This is a beautiful piece. Thank you vey much for sharing. I hope you have someone special to share the gift of "you" with. It sounds like a perfect way to spend christmas morning. By this is the best christmas poem I have read.
- Dusty Rose
  December 11, 2006
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  Thank You
  so very much...I appreciate your very kind comment, and applause...
  
  thanks again...Dusty
- - Dusty Rose
    December 12, 2006
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The Poetic Angel
December 11, 2006

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Merry xmas !!
wowwwwwwww me sis ... you sure gave him a nice prezzie i hopes he likes it n enjoys it lol a fantastic write sis only you cud do one like this keep writin sis smiles ~cheeky~ xx
- Dusty Rose
  December 11, 2006
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  Thank you sis
  I'm glad you liked it...I thought this place could use a little Holiday cheering up, but in my way love ya lots..your sis Dusty
Disturbed Prodigy
December 11, 2006

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hmmmm, this was good, i like it you dida great job, show some chirtmas cheer, lol, i loved how you related it to opening a present, i have seen it done before but you made it your own, so keep it flowing
- Dusty Rose
  December 11, 2006
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  Thank you
  and then thanks again I really appreciate it...
  
  much love ...Dusty
Maddogk
December 10, 2006

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Dusty,
This is a great christmas poem with a sensual twist. Very nice write.
Merry Christmas to you.
Jeffro
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you Jeffro
  for reading and commenting on this piece...I surely appreciate it
  
  much love..Dusty
deleteit
December 10, 2006

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Wow this is a great write and what a heck of a gift for Christmas!!!
Great Dusty
Much love
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you Velvet
  for the sweet comment.. I appreciate it so much..Hope all is well and you have a Merry Christmas!!!love ya much...Dusty
James R
December 10, 2006

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How exotic and amazing this right was. I think that would be the greatest gift of all. I loved this right I never new you could write something so truly cheeky but in a sly way. Excelnt piece of writing Dusty.
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you James
  Sly..who me??? LOL.....I really do appreciate you reading and commenting on this piece..it means alot to me
  
  much love..Dusty
Timid Poet2006
December 10, 2006

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Hottie Clause
Dusty; with gifts like that Chirstmas could last all year...you hope ..you hope.. this is just too much
and I think your groove is here to stay. DEE
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you Dee
  LOL..I appreciate it..and I do hope my groove is here to stay
  I hope you and your family have a Very Merry Christmas!!
  
  love ya much...Dusty
DJ Harley
December 10, 2006

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very nice sis this poem is very nice i love christmas jsut as much as i love presents, and i cant wait till the christmas morning when i can open some. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas sis.

Much love
Your brother John
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you John
  I love Christmas too..it's a wonderful time of year...I can't wait for it to hurry up and get here!!!!
  I hope you have a wonderful and joyous Christmas..
  
  love ya tons....Dusty
Poetic Aphrodite
December 10, 2006

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Oh how sweet and sensual, a gift I am sure many would like Bella.
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you
  Ever so much...I appreciate it..
  
  Dusty
JohnnyD
December 10, 2006

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Now THAT is the
Best damn christmas poem I have ever read!
And the most enticing....

JD
- Dusty Rose
  December 10, 2006
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  Thank you
  then a giggle.. I'm glad you liked...I'm trying to get my groove back..maybe this one will help, and they'll keep comming.
  
  Love...Dusty