Thousand Lights
-Burning in the concrete
urban ambiance
Author notes
Haiku
A contest entry
- Traditional Haiku & Senryu by liquidmindforever.
800 points, ended May 3, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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well written, interesting concept here, being a city girl...this appeals to me. Will read again later. Good Luck!
Kass
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i am fond of these, little things with big hearts,images that reach beyond the simple line. truly worthy of gold.
blessings and best wishes, ~richard
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Brilliant piece
I like this a lot. This puts an image in the reader's mind of neon lights or street lights burning into the concrete of the city. Burning into the pavement slabs. Very unusual piece. Brilliant.
Keep writing.
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nice. definitely one of the better haikus i've read on here. i'm no big fan of haikus, believe me. i do like the abstarctly specific image i get from this though. nice.
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Well written haiku - easy to visualize this scene. Congratulations on winning gold din this contest with this awesome poem -
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Ver nice haiku. Different topic than what I am used to seeing. Very creative. Good job.
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Amusing. Descriptive in a thought provoking manner.
Thank you for your entry and Good Luck in the contest.
~MotherMachineGunn~
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