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Family (cinquain)

Family
Forever, together
Loving, caring, sharing
All here this winter
Folks

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 1, 2008
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    very nice!
    Love it... feels very Christmas-y lol

    Enjoyed it and well done,
    keep the good writing coming..

    I know I have not been reading much of your work lately so this is about to change so don't get tired of me when you find my name popping up a lot.

    Nooni


  • nichtmich silver member
    December 11, 2006

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    Adorable

    This is a lovely tribute to your family and very nice at the Holiday time of the year. I'm afraid your syllable count might be off for a cinquain, unless this is a new form I don't know about. A cinquain is 6 lines long (counting the title) and the syllable count is 2,4,6,8,2. Maybe I'd better check to make sure Anyway, this is really good. Your talent shows.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 10, 2006

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    beautiful

    Very nice. Simple and right to the point.
    I enjoyed this a lot. My best wishes to you and your family as well as others.
    Brian