The emptyness surrounds me
makes me feel small
i see nothing
i hear nothing
i feel as though a blanket of nothingness surounds me
what would happen if i werent here
or i light a match
would such a small flame penetrate this blackness
i fear the darkness
never seeing anything
i wonder if this is what i would feelif i were blind
how could someone live this way
never seeing light
never seeing how beautiful flowers look in the morning and afternoon
the emptyness is always there but i wont ever let it stop me
Please tell me what you think
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In the darkness
while in the light it is true you can see the beauty of life. But while in the darkness you feel safe from the very things the light illuminates. In the darkness you can't see the pain, you can't see the ruin, you can't see the horrible things humanity has done. In the darkness you live in ignorance. Ignorance is so called bliss. Anyways its a good write, I liked it =D I'm going to put this comment on my page cuz I think it's awesome =D
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This darkness I have felt, and try oto do the same, not let it stop me, I liked this, and wish you well in your future writings.
Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you enjoy it here.
Keep it flowing.
~Krystal~
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