for that person .. better version .. well 1 line changed i think

Forever would be over tomorrow if I spent it with you,

I love everything about and all that you do.

Beautiful and simple, you stand out,

You're like a ray emerging from between grey clouds.

So wonderful, lush, fantastic and bright,

Just like dancing under the moonlight.

Alas my dear dear, you've seen me before,

Took not much notice and carried on with all.

I guess for now, forever is not soon ending,

But all's not lost with a love request pending.