Grab, twist, snap,
You fall to the floor,
I stare down at you,
At your lifeless body
Face up your in blood,
Your clothes ripped
Shredded and stained.
Pathetic
Your whole life was a waste,
Doing the same thing
Day in and day out,
Never changing anything,
The same fake smile
You put on every day
Was there today too.
Weak
Your I Love You’s meant nothing,
It was a simple phrase
Said with cold eyes,
Effecting the only ones who cared,
You never felt their pain,
Your heart was to black
To understand them.
Alone
They’d know it wasn’t murder,
Your blood was everywhere,
Your cold eyes even colder,
Did you do them a favor,
Trying to bury me deeper,
Scared they wouldn’t like me,
The person you really are.
Whole
Twitch, breath, blink,
The nightmares over,
Now’s the time to decide,
How will you walk out the door,
As the girl you’ve created for them,
Or the one you’ve always truly been,
Who you’ll be today.
Author notes
um...there really isnt any background story to this. it just kinda...happened. i really like the way it turned out though.
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Wow.... um, just.... wow. Kinda creepy, and very very thought provoking. Wonderful write!
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this is amazing...wow...thankyou so very very much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck!!!!!
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This is very nice write. Thanks for entering and goodluck
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There's lots of adjectives in this and it's amazing. I love this and you should keep on writing. Great job and good luck in the contest!
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i love it ur a wonderful ur writter and u put so much emotion in ur work i can almost feel what u felt keep up the good work! ~muah~ -
Wow...just...wow...it's a really sad write. It seems almost like you're angry with this person. I'd hate to be the person who was in your mind when you wrote this. ^_^ lol. Anyways, really good poem. Thank you for entering and good luck.
~Raine~
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Dude siiiick i like it bunches
i like it a lot and i liek the cool ass one word phrases lol thats intense. What made you write?
you should keep writing
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dude this is so fuckin cool man. seriously, you havent written in forever, and then when you do write you just pop something awesome out lol. i like the one word things before the stanzas. makes it sound really cool. i dont really know why you wrote this tho...a little explaination please? lol well i love you! and this is sooo fucking goooood lol
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