Does anyone hate open windows?
Open windows like I do...
Open windows that should be shut
Closed over so none can see in
I should have locked the window down
I should have pulled the curtains shut
I should have hid in a room of nothing
Only for you to open me up
Author notes
This is about everything and then some. Uh I guess i am using my hatred of people being able to see into my house, see into my secret space of earth, as a metaphore for something major thats happening in my social life.. something I have no idea how will turn out and it keeps making me thing all day long.
So to all that read this far - thanks and may light, love n peace grace your life.
- Peace
Please tell me what you think
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"This is about everything and then some" -I enjoyed your poem, and enjoyed this word phrasing even more. Which is slightly odd of my to say. At first I didn't really understand the starting line, I somewhat inwardly raise a questioning brow in curiosity.
In reading through, the words you picked and chose to write together made it well worth my read and time.
I don't know what will happen with your current predicament, in social situations but I wish you the best ... or do I?
-Black -
Moop
Speak to me girl, Ive been so busy with work, but Ill listen anytime! this was cool metaphorically, well written, good job.
ZLove Kare
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Zo, another brilliant write! I know what you are talking about, but I don't think there is anything I can really say about the issue except that everything will sort itself out!! 
many claps for you my dear
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