Strange and lost is the human creature
Always a hunter for void adventure
Violently seeking the ending that’s pending
You are confused and life is as cunning
Livings of earth don’t you know you are faking?
There is no path, it is lost from your making!
Creature of heaven Your eyes are a crystal,
But moovings of heart are not so simple.
Human is faith and human we stay
Here in the dawn to the sunset of fate.
Why do we hope in what we can't change?
Shoulda Woulda Coulda never repays.
Because even when you changed the cast
The show got confused and the décor burned out,
We are still in Nirvana - Entertain us,You said
And so we dance like the living,
Entertaining the dead.
Author notes
I think this would apply to the "show must go on" category. Enjoy.
A contest entry
- not just another dark poetry contest.... by Jaymy.
450 points, ended December 22, 2006, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best of the Best, etc. by Heavenly Angel.
1500 points, ended June 13, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very well done
A fine sharing into this contest; I like the thought process behind it
I wish you all the best in this contest -
Great
Great piece of poetry. I love this new style! It's refreshing! I love the meaning behind it, and I totally agree with what it's telling. There is just one mispelling, that you probally know of, so I like it! Oh and I love this line, "Here in the dawn to the sunset of fate." I just get this image of pathetic people that won't face life head on walking into a bright red sunset. Great imagery! Oh, and it flowed nicely.
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this is a good piece of poetry i find which you have written here with some style, it holds a nice gentle rhythm to the poem and the flow is very nice indeed. i thank you very much indeed for sharing your poetic talent. i enjoyed reading it. i wish that you have good luck in the contest you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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this is beautiful, I really enjoyed it! and you're right, it fit's into the show must go on theme well. thank you so much for entering!
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