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I believe

Free me from my mind
Capture me now
Away from mankind
Fulfill your vow

Blind my eyes
From my lust
Let me see
Beyond reality’s dust

To the resting place
Carry my bones
Stuck on a dream
Cold as stone

Not feeling at all
Yet aware of you
Unable to reach out
Waiting for the rescue

I believe
I love
I doubt
sort of

I know you hear
I know you’re here
Is it enough?
To wipe my tear

Change in me what is old
Take away my precious gold
Replace its value and rarity
With attributes of charity

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Tuesday, October 24th, 2006

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  • greyhaime silver member
    December 9, 2006

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    transition from the material to the inner and charitable is often a task that takes years. This is waht I took from this, and I liked it, Thank youfor sharing this, and let me say a Welcome to you to AllPoetry.If you should have any questions please contact a member of the greeter team and we can see about helping you out. This is a wonderful community of people with some really amazing work to be read.S make youself at home and enjoy.
    Keep it flowing-
    ~Krystal~