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A world changed by love

A world changed by love brings hope

When two lovers can walk hand in hand
Over a field of snow they'll reminsce
Remembering what it was like years ago
Loving life for all that it could give them
Drawing inspiration from a world changed by love

Crispness in the air and the snow's falling soft
Holding each other for a sweet winters kiss
A warmth and glow fills the very heart with love
Now they realize that there's nothing sweeter there
Gazing into each others eyes...magic begins to flow
Everything that the beauty of love takes them away
Driven by passion they live in a world changed by love

Before that it was such a bleak existance for them
Yes...a world changed by love makes many things different

Love that is as majestic as the snow-capped mountains
Or as crystal clear as the water that's now iced up
Very tenderly they understand the meaning of it all
Especially when a world changed by love is special!

David

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 13, 2007
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    Nice piece. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest. - cgirl0410


  • Manic Panic
    March 8, 2007

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    Wow! Great poem. This definately really came from the heart. You did a very nice job in conveying your emotions. This is truly a beautiful piece.
    Keep writing, I hope to read more from you in the future.


  • JoyfulWriter
    December 10, 2006

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    You always write so beautifully from the heart and soul...each poem leaves me in total awe....just thought I would let you know....smiles, Terry


  • Desire gold member
    December 9, 2006

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    Wow-

    Another Beautiful Acrostic David
    You pen of Love to Magnificently~
    Thank You for sharing this and bringing forth smiles

    Hope You are having a Great Saturday~
    Keep that ink flowing~~
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~