There's something that works time after time
Whenever that happens I'll notice this here
One look is all that you have to give me baby
To not only melt my heart but take away my fears
To gaze into your eyes of passion sends me to heaven
Where it's a world of passion and fulfilled desire
One look brings me right to my knees baby...yes it does
It makes me emotional and brings this intensity much higher
For there's something I'd love to see baby right now
No longer afraid and I can't hold back here any longer
The signals time after time has slowly overwhelmed me
Each look brings me closer and my passion's getting stronger
Now here's one look for you that might be a bit daring
The fire in my eyes gazing upon you are now very glaring
One look from your eyes summons me to take you away there
Open your arms for me baby...we have a night of loving to share
Yes...take me to your lair and wherever else you want me to go
Looking into your eyes I can see this evening unfolding baby
For one look already has you undressed and ready for loving
From head to toe baby making love tonight's a reality
One look has stopped me right in my tracks and I've realized
That view has soothed me and how I've waited for this moment
I knew it..for right now not only are our eyes locked but this
Two souls entwined as one...the only way making love was meant
Author notes
Option #1
A contest entry
- Make Me Want You!! by Trixie08.
300 points, ended December 23, 2006, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
This poem is so sensual and it's beautiful it has some erotica to it as well but, it expresses such deep emotion and it made me kind of teary eyed alittle LOL! Excellent Write!
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Ahhhhh
This has the most fragrant and enticing ring to it my dear writer. You indeed know your way around seducing the ladies with you pen...and I'm inebriated again. Wonderful piece.
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beautifully romantic, the love of the heart, that is soon expressed as two souls entwined!
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the eyes not only view, but the also observe...the signal of love are there and it doesn't take a trained eye to see the beauty of love that's expressed and takes in...there's a beautiful passion to love ())))>---%---
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the eyes view love, the heart feels love, the soul expands into realms of pure delight at your love
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the eyes sees many things, and the heart can beat constantly...the spark that the emotion of love gives, makes that heart beat faster and gives the glow the eyes lovingly shows...that can melt the thickest ice
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so you are the cause of global warming, your passions are heating up the world!
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let the sparks fly then...for it makes a warm winter then ()))))>----%----
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let my sweet snowman melt.
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as the snowman melts so will the woman that's loved...for they'll melt together
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the coroners office will not be able to distinguish one lover from the other, as they float their love and ecstacy into the millenium of time immortal.
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there will be no need for a coroner...for love will not only be alive...they'll probably have to call the fire department...which will be better suited to understand this meltdown...
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those fire men and women will need to be permanently dispatched, to be at the side of this love, attempting to extinguish it, as it burns on into time unending.
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