Let's ink to flow your heart on white,
let's words to play the game of rhyme,
for love and kiss we shared tonight,
forbidden feelings grow to sublime.
Story is like a lovely fairy tale,
not yet improved sounds of potpourri.
Fingers touch soften than silky veil,
words of love dedicated to thee.
Two kids in fever because of first kiss,
cheeks blushed like soft petals of rose.
Trembling hearts were filled with a bliss,
souls sensitive and freely exposed.
Dancing hearts connected, feelings tight,
me, your princess, and you as my knight.
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BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a beautiful poem you have penned Sonja. It was delightful and a pleasure to read.
I love your picture too. Soooo cute!!! Love poems about fairytales. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy 
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Thank you Sandy. I am delighted with your visit to my poetry. I will read some of your recently posted poetry too.
~Sonja~
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Beautiful
So beautiful Sonja. Some very nice images in this one. Best of luck with the competition.
Jim
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Thank you Jim. De to my job dutied I don't have enough time to spent on AP site, bt it's always nice to see my dear friend message. Thanks for good wishes. Actualy, I am not expecting too much.
~Sonja~
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the charm of it...
the english might be imperfect, yet this is actually what dresses this poem in the kind of conquering charm which only innocence and purity can achieve. you – the kid, waking up to another kid’s charm and suddenly seeing the world through fairy tale eyes. and wondering which of your visions is true . i won’t solve the riddle for you though i know which version of the alternate realities is true . another charming sribble of your talented pen, my friend.
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Thank you Joe for your time to read my charming imperfection, lol
Anyhow, what could be better than kid's innocent first kiss?
~Sonja~
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Thank you for your excellent entry into my contest, yoru talent and hard work are very much appreciated. I loved this poem, the way it captured the fire of first love, or young love, suited it perfectly. Loved the imagery of the poem captured in the picture above it. This poem is very good and a great addition to my contest. Though i did love the poem, i won't be able to judge it until you tell me what option you chose to write about. Again great job and please do add the option before it is time to judge. Thanx and great job.
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Thank you Tiphanie for this interesting contest and challenge. I added my option the same time I posted my poem and this is not the first time that it vanished somehow, but I am going to see right now wha't happend with it.
~Sonja~
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Beautiful
Lovely job with this.. Such a sweet tale of th first kiss. such innocence.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Thank you Valerie. I am glad you like it.
~Sonja~
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THIS IS SO SWEET!
The innocence of a first kiss, all of their dreams and hopes are held close in their hearts.
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Thank you Kevin.
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DEAR SONJA
You are always sincerely welcome,
I always enjoy reading your poems for they bring to me such a wonderful sense of peace and calm.
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