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This is Our Perfection

Let this moment last forever,
I don't want to let go of you,
It's been forever since I've felt like this,
And I don't want the feeling to go away.

Time seems to slow down,
As we hold each other tight,
Everything seems all right again,
While I'm here in your arms.

For far too long I've longed for this,
For far too long I've needed this,
I've needed you,
But I've been too far away.

Another hug and a kiss goodnight,
This goodbye has gone on forever,
Still don't want to let go,
Please, stay with me tonight.

And we'll sleep side by side,
Wrapped up in your blankets,
Yet keeping each other warm,
Still in each other's arms.

This is what I needed,
What I longed for, what I cherished,
What I yearned for, what I dreamt of.
This is our perfection.

Author notes

Uh. I so did not mean for it to kinda sound like sex was involved in this poem. "Stay with me tonight" is not insinuating that at all, and all they do is sleep next to each other. o.o;

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  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 29, 2007

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    Wow this is a deep write and I enjoyed it much. You have such depth and emotion painted into this poem, It is like looking at a picture. God bless you and Keep the Faith. Love you.

    IN Christ Jesus,

    Tabitha

  • Jake Wesley
    January 23, 2007

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    Sorry I haven't read any of your poems in a while. It was a good poem. I liked it...I can't think of anything else to say. Talk to you later perhaps.


  • Kristin Melissa
    December 9, 2006

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    I like this alot... i know the feeling of missing someone you love, and just wanting to be with them. Then when you do get to be with the person, it seems like nothing can go wrong