Dedicated to My angel and life long sister- BitterCandy
I never saw her
We were so far away
Yet when I look back
I feel as though I knew her forever
She’s so kind
The kind of sister that you can always depend on
The sorrow that was once in my heart
Is now gone
All thanks to her
That one special person
The one who dry's my tears away
The one who makes me feel special
The one who made my heart shine
The one who made me crack a grin
I can put down the knife
Turn on the lights
Let my heart drench in happiness
With no more fears or worries
It’s all thanks to that one special person
You’re the one who makes my heart soar
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Aw. Its so sweet.
Aw. This is such a sweet poem. It really is. Wonderful, really. Keep it up. My favourite lines are:
"The one who dry's my tears away
The one who makes me feel special?"
Nice work.
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First, let me thank you for entering my contest.
Second:
This poem was very touching. The flow and imagery was very well done. I suggest the use of puncuation for a professional look and easier reading.
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Awwww.
Me love this poem. It is so sweet. Though,I have to admit sisters can be annoying at times. Kidding...but what you say is true. You should continue writting poems such as this. This poem is also another favourite of mines. These would be my favourite lines: "The one who dry's my tears away
The one who makes me feel special
The one who made my heart shine
The one who made me crack a grin
I can put down the knife
Turn on the lights"
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great
i love this one! a sister can mean alot to some one.. i was unable to grow up with mine. but now that i know her she means the world to me and always will....
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Silly You are Really Gonna Make me cry now!
Speechless! Beyond words. I don't know what to say. God I thank the moment I met you, though never saw you, you're a blessing in my life, once again God showed he cares... Thanks beautiful Angel for making my life complete, now my day are brighter and nights more peaceful for I've found hapiness I was looking for. Thanks my lil sis, you're truly a beautiful person inside & out. Anything for you I'll do. God Please give all he rsorrows & pain, this is all I desire and let her be a kid with no more sorrows, just all the joys even the ones you stored for me. Thanks sweet-P
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