This lonely man did come to me
In a dream I had last night
I spoke to him, he kissed my brow
Then vanished out of sight
Lots of dogs were also there
My daughter by my side
The sky was dark, the air was cool
And shadows seem to hide
This house I know stood so cold
My car so black it gleamed
Why is it that I saw these things
Within the dream I dreamed
Author notes
This poem relates to a dream I had. The lonely man still has me stumped
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Comments
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Strange dream. This would be a very interesting dream to have. I thought this was a great write. Keep It Up!!!
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This is a really cool poem. Man I would be stumped to if I had a dream like this. Very interesting!!! I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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The end of this poem reminded me much of a poem I admire by Edgar Allen Poe. And the rest was well off on its own. Dreams are a very puzzling and personal subject. Thank you for sharing.
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i had a dream one time that reminded me of this one in a simualar way , i believed that he may of been my guardian angel or something , i was totally paralized at the time and could not breath as he was talking to me and i'm not even sure if it was a dream i may have been awake , it was very spiritual for me and i will never forget it as long as i live , so dreams as we know them could just be reality
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