Two years ago today,
She took her life away,
She couldn't take the pain anymore,
And she had nothing to live for.
She left us all behind,
While her life she redesigned,
She took things into her own hands,
And why, no one still understands.
She caught us all by surprise,
Now these tears fall from our eyes,
Her life was overwhelmed by lies,
But she always had a clever disguise.
She found a way for the pain to be released,
But now her life on earth is forever deceased,
But we know she's in heaven with God,
Where she no longer wears the clever facade.
A pistol to the heart and one single shot,
And now her life will never be forgot.
Author notes
option #1 "lost"
This is about my best friends mother who commited suicide two years ago on the fifth of December. She was depressed and couldn't take it anymore, and took a pistol to the heart. It was a couple days until someone even found her lying on her living room floor.
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WOW.
This was great. Exactly the type I am looking for.
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it was... quite a poem i felt like crying
great job!
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