Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Je t'aimerai jusqu'à je ne pourrai pas t'aimer

Je ne pense pas que tu sois mon à jamais
c'est possible que tu n'es pas mon demain.
Et je ne suis pas bête
je ne crois pas en seulement une personne
C'est un rêve-n'est pas davantage.
Il y aura un fin de nous
nous nous serons des fantômes.
Mais je dois t'aimer jusqu'à je ne peux pas
Parce que...
Parce que.
C'est amour.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PetersMomma
    December 9, 2006

    Edit | Reply

    Wow.

    Do you KNOW how true this is? I mean, dang. I'm in that position right now. Wow. This is an amazing poem, in French and English. I was in awe once I read "I don't belive in only one person/that's a dream-nothing more". SO many people think that there is only ONE person for everyone. They're wrong. Thank you for letting people see that. Like the dude below me said, You rock!

  • PalmettoSky
    December 8, 2006

    Edit | Reply
    This poem has a nice natural gentle flow. I definitely wasn't expecting all of the stuff between the first line and the ending statement. Your wording was excellent. I am glad I read it. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways. You rock....