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Failure

Things is
I can blame everyone I want
Teacher
Friends
Parents
for not seeing I needed help
But the truth is
It's my own fault

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  • xXAngelBabyXx
    December 8, 2006

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    it's true when ever i mess up on something real badly I sometimes blame others when really its my own fault. Life sucks.
    but keep on writing more.


  • lovelight05
    December 8, 2006

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    Honest

    This piece really spoke to me, i think because it has such a topic that you can just instantly relate to it, because alot of people feel the same way. It's very well written and really to the point without having to be long. I love short poetry and write alot of it myself so liked this piece even more.
    xxxx
    Hannah