the phone fell to the floor
the words that you said i heard no more
& as I listened to the things
that you didnt want to tell me
your words held no apology.
everything you once said was
a lie, a lie, an awful lie
& i knew just want to do
i tore & tore each note you gave
to prove this just to you
(& to get you out of my mind)
but i still remember everything
that i could not rip away from my memory
like the day when we stood, entwined
in front of mirrors that couldnt deny
the soft words that spoke
'you were made for me'
(& now, we barely speak)
you said you would always be there
but i don't see how
i've needed you more than ever
& you're not here now.
it was all a lie, a lie, an awful lie
When you said, you swore
our love would never die
Author notes
i heart brighteyes.
inspired by the song
'haligh, haligh, a lie, haligh'
A contest entry
- Dark or Sad! by fallen-leaf.
450 points, ended January 6, 2007, 24 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very deep. thanks and goodluck.
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a very deep poem, great rhyming, very heartfelt. congrats on the silver trophies, thank you very much for your entry, and good luck
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Really Deep.
Wow. Now this is totally deep. But I enjoyed reading this powerful piece. Thanks for sharing it, and entering my contest. And Good luck!
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thank you very muchly so, miss. =)
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no more sadness for anam....cause i said so. although, it makes you turn out amazing poems, i dont like you being sad cuase it makes me sad. we should hang out again so we can be stupid and eat chocolate till we get sick and then be stupidly happy, even if it only lasts that one night, it'll make you feel better. <3
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