I don’t want the stars
I don’t desire the moon
I want no home on the clouds
All I desire is my feet on earthly grounds
No sparkles of diamond
No shiny pearls from the deepest oceans
Don’t require jeweled crown
All I desire is no pain
No pots of gold
No sterling silver
Don’t seek too much of green paper
All I desire is you to be spare
And with me you spend quality time
I don’t want a heart of gold
All I ever needed
Was and is a pure and simple heart
That knows how to cry and bleed
I don’t want all the fluffs
Just a simple warm kiss
Don’t look for forced laughter
Just a simple smile will do
I want the love
Only if you want to give
I’ll be by your side
And together we’ll succeed
A trip to a dollar store
A Mc Donald pie for a buck
Or a single rose, only if you must
A cuddly little bear
Or a tiny box of chocolates
Anything you do for me
All I desire is for you to think of me
I seek the riches
But not in your pocket
The one hidden in your gentle heart
I seek sparkling diamonds
I see in your eyes
The necklace of your masculine tender hands
Around my neck, all the way to my waist
Play with me in the rain
Let’s go build a snowman
A walk on the autumn leaves
Or a stroll in the spring parks
Sit by me as I lean on you
Watch with me people pass by
A morning cup of tea
Toasted breakfast
Sometimes you bring me to my bed
Do what ever
All I desire is for us to be together
Let me be your inspiration
As you inspire me
I’ll take care of you
If you share your life with me
Little things you would do for me
This is all I desire
My heart once broken
Many at times was used and thrown
Now here I stand alone
Behind closed doors
My heart locked and bolted
Hidden are all my aspirations
Knock my door and I’ll peak through the window
Be patient and don’t run away
I might let you in
If you show me the keys
Not if you’re a super man
Or drive in front of me in Mercedes Benz
Send me the expensive stones
Chocolates with hugging bear
Next to the crystal pot of flowers
All these don’t mean a thing
Will only and only
You will possess the key
To the bolted heart of mine
If you are first
A nice, caring, loving person
I don’t care of the past
You stand before me in present
Whose hand I will take and walk into the future
Sure but don’t lie
Don’t hide the truth
Let your mind rest
And let your heart speak
For I’ve time to listen before I leap
Stir stew in the kitchen together
Love the sweetness of desserts
Take a plunge into Spices
Respect my norms and culture
Celebrate Indian festivals
Little things you need to remember
As with me you enjoy life’s simple pleasures
If we be together
We will not be very far
From the riches and all the luxuries
We shall build beautiful home
With lots of animals
Grow our own herbs and flowers
Keep a separate room for almighty power
Where I would say my daily prayers
Seek his love and blessings
To begin our happy lives together, everyday
When the time will be right for it will be
You and me sure will see, then will we
Tie the knot and go through grueling
Four days of long Indian wedding
After we run the aisle and say we do
What more can I say
I just hope and pray every single day
As we start our lives together on that special day
I know we will be ready
Forever to cherish each other
And will have the blessed power
To create a new life, the product of our love for each other
I will smile as I will watch you play
With tiny little toddler that will come our way
Nourish them with our love and support
And watch them flourish into healthy caring beings
When they will be ready to leave the nest and fly away
Let them go and say our goodbye
To start all over, only this time by
Watching our digital video memories
And laugh at our kids repeating our upbringing
All the above will be possible if we will remember
Understanding will build a strong bridge in between
If we will be open to communication
Don’t say, much just a quick hello over the phone
When the night falls, a bear hug from you will be more than fine
Light dinner conversation
If not on week days, at least once over the weekend will suffice
All I desire from you and me is no false pretence.
This is my dream for you and me
Get this and only then fill in the application
For I will discard if it will not fit the description
So, are you ready to be my man?
My soul mate, the other half?
Or you are not man enough?
This is all I desire for us, you and me
Author notes
(Optin # 3 in the Contest) Thank you for reading my desires hehehehe
In a list
A contest entry
- Options from the Heart & Soul by riccadeana.
400 points, ended December 13, 2006, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~~Show me true love~~ by RudolfTamer.
420 points, ended January 8, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow
Gal you sound like one in a million. I think this is requried reading for ALL women
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Thanks Bob
OOH!! you don't want to mess with woman
lol ... you can't tell them what to do... Thanks for taking time to read this one, it's been a while I wrote this... I don't know about being in a million, I know it's just me, who desires simple things in life for that's what really makes life worth living... I appreciate your support & applauds... take care Minoo
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Loved this poem very much. Thanks for sharing!
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Idk
Idk does no mean it is bad it means I don't know what to think I really enjoyed reading this you are a very talented writer the whole thing kept me sucked in I felt like a "vacum" was turned on and i could get out NOT THAT I WANTED TO. I acutally enjoyed this. alot of poetry I write I can relate back to my past relationships and everything i read from everybody keeps me going day by day I get a warm glowy feeling from all these poems sometimes I laugh at the poems (my friends like I'm crazy) but I realy liked this poem keep up the good work I love to read your poems keep them coming ~kal
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Now this is one emotional Masterpiece~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart~
Beautiful words spoken~
can't help but want to shed tears~
Much Happiness Your way~
Keep that ink flowing~~
Best wishes to You in the contest~
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This was fantastic, a sweet and humble poem for the one you desire. Definatly a piece that is straight from the heart. Thank you for sharing.
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Nice
This piece is very nice and inspiring. I wish that love could truly be like this, that would be my dream come true. I sometimes watch the day time soap operas and am fascinated by the romance and love they share and often wonder if love is really like that. I want to thank you for entering this piece because it has giving me the inspiration that there is something out there waiting...good luck!!!
PS
Please ensure that you put the option of your choose in your authors notes so that I know what option you choose from..thank you -
awesome
beautiful words, you used in this poem, such a kind soul spirit. keep it up...
red roses
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Thanks Red Roses!
Thank you my rose for beautiful comment & loving applaud. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I really appreciate your time. Thanks again!
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Aww...This is soo sweet. I enjoyed reading this.
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Thanks Gossmer Hades!
Thanks for stopping by & taking time to read and comment. I really appreciate your comment & encouragement. Thanks again for your time.
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*sigh* What more could one ask???????? Nothing that I know of. And yet, for some reason, one can not find that in any one. Or at least I haven't. Thought I had, but i was once again wrong. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks SunshineGirl!
Thanks you so much for stopping by & reading my poem. I appreciate your thoughful comment & lovely encouragement. Thanks a lot for your time. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
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I think this is probably one of the sweetest and one of the most sincere things I've read in quite a while...
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Thank you My Heavenly Angel!
Thanks so much for stopping by and taking time to read and leave a beautiful comment, it means a lot to get an encouragement from one of the best writers, I'm truly humbled and honored beyond words. Thanks again for your time. Happy Holidays & Take Care.
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A beautiful heartfelt write. Good imagery, flow and tone. Very nice expression of emotion. Good descriptives and word choice. Nice alliteration and metaphor. You express the hope of your heart very well in this piece. You have painted a lovely picture of your soul mate. A much enjoyed read. Shelley
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Thanks Shelley
Thank you Shelley for stopping by and taking time to read and understand it. This is me, I don't desire the moon all my little bleeding heart desires is true love to sweep me off my feet hehehehe...I'm pathetically romantic & insanely sensitive & emotional, so I've been often told. Well Thanks again for your time, applaud & encouraging comment. My poem is not as nice as yours, but I try & will try till I die...Happy Holidays & Take Care.
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Hi BitterCandy. There's nothing wrong with being romantic. It was a pleasure to read your words. Your poem was written from your heart. All good poetry is. You've done a fine job with this piece. Take care and Happy Holidays to you. Shelley
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WOW
that was very very long but to the point ty for sharing this meant alot
Stars
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Thanks StarsandMoonShine
Thanks so much for stopping by and actually live through this very long poem. I'm glad you made it through & even left lovely comment & I love smiling applauds. I'm glad you liked reading it. Thanks again for your time.
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Wow! I'm like reading all your poems and again this is such great work! I love your poems! Your such a great poem writer! If only everyone had your skills in poetry! Well we can't all be that good. Hun, this was a really great great poem. Keep it up! I'm off to read your other poems! Take care.
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Hey My lil Lankan!
Thanks sweetie for your lovely comment & yoodling applauds. You are my silly billy angel who inspires me to fly high & reach for the skies for there you are. Thanks sweetheart. Take care
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It is very easy for the words to flow when they are being written about our heart's desires. This is all so very, very true, it's not the material things but just to be considered by the one you love is all that is truly needed to be happy.
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Thanks ImperfectSoul
Thanks for agreeing with me. I know we often drift away from the little things that make us whole. Well I wish who ever is my other half where ever he is, his test would be to read this & weep.hehehe Thanks for stopping by and taking time to read. I appreciate your comment Thanks again.
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Awwwwwww, Minoo, you've done it again....I just wish we could all find the person to fulfill all of our desires..This poem left me....speachless.I think you've spoken for most if not all women in the world...Thank you for sharing this.
~ Mia
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Hey Mia! My Goddess!
Damn I'm good hehehe just kidding! Thanks hun for like always a great comment and love the yoodling applauds. More power to the woman... & some to man too so that they can understand this hehehehe.
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what a wonderful poem i wish my boyfriend would relize that money isnt everything but he's a sweet heart any ways wonderful write great job
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I wish all men would realize this!
Thanks Water Fang for stopping by and taking time not only to read, but to comment and love your smiley applauds. Thanks again for your time.
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Aww!!!
This is so sweet so caring so inpsiring you made me cry This is so beautiful... I love it. Thank you oh so much for sharing this is wow nice cute what I wishmy love could see and read so he knows what I feel for him... Thankyou again for sharing
You are an amazing poe
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Thanks Babe
I'm kinda glad I made you cry Winter Raven. Thanks sweeT for enjoy reading it. I appreciate your beautiful comment that encourages me to write some more and laways love the yahooing applauds. Thanks again.
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I LOVE THIS, this is like one of the best poems i have read today, i thank you for sharing it, thou my desire are kind of different, i think you express your perfectly enough for me to dream of them too,lol, keep it flowing
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That one left me speachless i love this one proboly the most. I cant say i loved one part cuz i loved the whole thing but if i had to choose id pick
"I seek the riches
But not in your pocket
The one hidden in your gentle heart
I seek sparkling diamonds
I see in your eyes"
for thats what i wish someone would finaly say to meand actualy mean it...
thank you for another magnifacent poem
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Hey Lil Monkey!
Hi sweetT, thanks again for stoppin by and reading my poem. In time hun, it will happen, just a little patience and faith you need to hold on to tight and the love of your life will one day become your highlight. Take care hun. Just remember, what goes around comes around...since you are sweet & nice, don't let anything taint you no matter how hard life gets.. & you will reap the sweet fruits. I love the yoodling applauds. Thanks again!
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BRILLIANT
We seek the little things as woman, not many men get it. The poem is aspiring as other poets have commented. Well done.
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Thanks Ami
Thanks a lot for stopping by and taking time off of your demanding life...I really really appreciate you reading my poem. Thanks for enjoying reading it and I love the yahooing applauds you gave me. Thanks a lot!
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Sweet and Innocent. The world needs more of this.
Commendable desires. Wish I could put my desires into words, but can't. Seems like it would be expectations and expectations are meant to filter life and it's beauties somehow (and also the beauty might go away by investing in it thus). Not altogether the best approach for me, but it's sort of where this poem leads me after the fact, if you will, if that makes sense. I also like that someone can still purey seek trust through trust. Getting rare these days. -
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Thanks Timothy
I love your such encouraging truthful comments. Thanks for stopping by and reading my piece. My dad always tells me when you think it's very simple, you can be sure, it will be the hardest to achieve & of course he is never ever ever wrong, he's the genius kid and he is the bestest of the bestest (I'm not biased or anything ). Also expectations lead to frustration, I believe in this too.. These are simple common things that every soul desires may be more at times, but the basic necesessities of life still remain the same. Then again common sense is the most uncommon thing in this world too. Any how, thanks for stopping by buddy!
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You're reading my diary, aren't you? You vocalize your thoughts so beautifully... it's amazing. I want these things. Simple, yet hard, to get. Interesting how that works^^ I really like this (like all of your other works that I've read). So totally adding you to my favorites! =] As always, keep up the great work!
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Hey Blondie-the-Great!
You got that right babe! I read your diary that's written all i you rmind, I'm a mind reader hehehehe. Sweetheart my dadda always tells me if something is too simple, it's guaranteed it will be very difficult to acheive...just like common sense is the most uncommon thing in this world. Thanks again for the applauds and beautiful comment. Take care Until next time!!! God Bless you and your family.
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i'm kinda speechless now but this is a GREAT peice of work. i like it. its not my style but i really like it!! i can relate to this also in a way. all i can really say right now is that your a great writer and you should keep it up. seriously! lol. well, please read some of mine. if u get a chance. you might not like the subject but i do have some love poems if you dont like the others. well, laterz!
loves...
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Thanks Love!
I really appreciate your applauds and very sweet encouragement. I'm glad you find my poem intriguing and you enjoy them too though not your style. You're an angel with a very kind soul. Take good care of yourself and may God fulfill all your wishes
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brilliant
This was beautiful. I loved it. I know how you feel to only want the heart and nothing more ... I hope that this particular person fulfils your desires beyond your wildest dreams. xoxoxox rach
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Thanks Tualau--Goddess
Thank you so much for such sweet gesture and brilliant comment. Thanks so much for stopping by, enjoying reading and then took time to comment too. Thats really kind of you. Thanks hun. The vacancy is still open
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Okay why do you do this to me every time i was drawn in once again i was told all the things i really wanted in life i was told that all i really wanted was someone to love and care and be there for me i dont want gold and diamond rings i just want to be loved i dont want sex all i want is someone to cuddle with and to love me as much as i love him great job keep it up and if you dont stop i might have to ask you how you do it how you became this wonderful artist you are today
keep it up keep writing for me
love to hate
kaka
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Beautiful
I like this. A beautiful brilliant piece of writing from your heart. Well done.
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Thanks Wayne
Thank you so much for a beautiful comment. I simply love the roses and happy yoodling applauds. Thanks again for stopping by and enjoying reading my poem.
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This is aspiring. It is amazing how the simplest of our wishes is the hardest to fulfill.
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This is really aspiring. I think we women all wish this more so than the men do. It amazes me how the simplest of our wishes are the hardest to fulfill.
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Absolutely True My Lady!
Thanks for taking time to read a long poem of mine. It's true simple pleasures we so desire, men simply can't get a grip on. Thanks for agreeing with me my friend. Thanks Lady Atheia for being the first one to agree. Thanks so much for your time. Just wondering how many guys would read and not comment! hhhmmmmmmmm!
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