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Grim Goodbye

Why do I deserve love
Love doesn't deserve me
What makes me so special.
I'm suffering, so what.
Pain is nothing new to this world
Neverending cycle of darkness
Destroying the souls of the good
Turning them evil, freezing their hearts
Riots in foriegn countries
Suffering children with no food
All the terror, eating away at us
Humans killing, for no good reason
This world is full of tragedies
It is prepetually plaguing our planet
I am no one to complain
No need to spare a passing glance
For I am not special
I am nothing new,
Just another sad teen.
Leave me here to bleed
Cold in the gutter
Don't spare a passing glance
My soul is not tortured
Just selfish, needing attention
Wanting acceptance, it will never come
So full of pride, never give up
Live the dream, continue without me
I'll be in a better place
Lost in my dreams, that's no way to live
I don't deserve a life, I'll continue wasting away
Scaling the wall to happiness
I got too close, slipped, fell to my demise
Now I lay dormid, terrorized by happy thoughts
Don't feel sorry, this is my fault
Just leave me here, in the gutter.
My blood will wash away
People will forget
Life goes on.

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  • Yours-To-Have
    February 19, 2007

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    Thanks! This is a very strong entery say that this isn't anything new. It happens all the time (at least that is what I thought). Keep up the great work and good luck. I'm sorry it took soo long to comment also.

    Lots of love!

    **Amanda**


  • Child of an Angel
    February 5, 2007

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    dang

    This is exactly like we are talking about Joshy, perfect write, i know exactly how you feel. I sure hope people like US catch a break soon. Great choice of words and flow. keep the penn flowing and keep hope cuz with out that how would people like US survive?

    Love ya

    Emily

  • devilchild623425
    December 8, 2006
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    I fell so sad when i read this....we care about you fatty...don't ever forget that! 3<


  • ElementalXbeauty
    December 7, 2006

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    good one

    very nice. lol, it's just strange to hear it from you, the arrogant, sarcastic, insulting one. haha j/p. nice job...ttyl. -laur*


  • Rez.
    December 7, 2006
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    *You Need To See My Face!*

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