All of the adrenaline
bursts and bubbles in a
correlated, corrosive
demeanor, destroying the
equatable elixir
from friendly furnaces
gashing at the girdles and
hurdles the many hundreds of
intensive immunities into
jagged juxtapositions of
kinked knots,
losing all levitation and
motivation to move from one
node to the next,
opening obtrusive
problems that predict the
quarrelsome question of quarantine.
Rare are the recoveries from
such a sinister succubus of
tall terrifying tiers that
ugly urgency undoes the room with
vice and viciousness of
worried words and warped
xeroxes of examples that have
yet to yearn for their year of
zealotry and zest.
Author notes
consciously consult your cranium
commented on The Rage That I Stitch To Lips
A contest entry
- Open To Anything At All by Poetic Rage.
450 points, ended June 2, 2007, 54 entries
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I just love alliteration by heygoo.
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What is your opinion of the poem and do you think this is a creative style?
Comments
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It is terribly hard to alliterate certain letters, which I'm sure you discovered in this piece. I appreciate that you have made the attempt to take the challenge to the next level in doing the entire alphabet. Nice job.
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very interesting
poems like this can very easily be akward, choppy, and irritating to read. this one, however, was not. i found it an enjoyable read, an intellectual pleaser, and an overall good poem.
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I’m astonished that this poem never received feedback until now. I have always found forms similar to this to be too challenging to attempt, but you have definitely pulled it off. I think the consistency of similar letters would make this somewhat difficult to read aloud, but it flows smoothly in my mind. Very interesting structure. Thank you for entering the contest.
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