Things would be ok,
if i was allowed to have a heartbeat,
and i could live,
im colder than the ice outside.
chorus
can you feel my pulse?
(it's racing)
can you hear my heart beat?
(it's speeding)
do you feel and hear me?
(breaking into two)
i'm dying inside,
can't someone help me?
isn't there anything to save my life?
before I drown in this sea of death.
chorus
Can you feel my pulse?
(it's fading)
can you hear my heart beat?
(it's slowing)
do you feel and hear me?
(falling apart)
and if only i could live,
i'd do all the things I said i'd do,
devote them all too you,
this is painless
(im really hurting)
is this dying?
(just like sleeping)
But im never waking up
(never waking up)
chorus
can you feel my pulse?
(its not there)
can you hear my heart beat?
(its stopped)
do you feel and hear me?
(slipping away)
and if only i could
(only i could)
if only i could
(only i could)
if only i could
(only i could)
if only i could
(only i could)
LIVE FOR YOU
Author notes
ok so you must be wondering what the bracketed words are? well it's for the second/support singer and the rest is for the lead.
enjoy
A contest entry
- Write me a world, write me a rhyme, write me a tale of yours and mine. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 19, 2006, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Actually, I knew what the bracketed stuff was for... I read a lot of lyrics and write it. It's the repeat if you will, or the background whatever you wanna call it. This song is really sad, I can feel the dying and I am dying for this person, I want to bring them back to life... Thanks for sharing and good luck!
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Excellent!
oh wow that was amazing! it was so good and i absoulutly loved reading it!! excellent work. good luck in the contest!!!
~Lovey
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