My words are inadequate.
My mind is blank,
Covered over by a blanket,
One which hides logical thought.
I can't explain
Explanations are useless.
I can give you the essence
Of what I feel.
The tip of the iceberg,
But under the surface is hidden.
It's a secret.
Words weakly attempt
To tell this story.
Analyse the scene
With facts missing.
Because facts don't work
And fiction can't take the work.
Imagination has it's limits.
As long as you don't want sense,
Then ask me what I am.
For I can't form words,
Not to aid my argument,
Not to clear away the storms.
The crack in my mind.
The flaw in my sanity.
A contest entry
- 1st Contest!! by xox-lankan-xox.
550 points, ended December 17, 2006, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Best!!! by KnightOfShadows.
425 points, ended May 25, 2007, 144 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"My mind is blank," I know the feeling! lol great job! I really enjoyed reading this piece!!! I Loved the way you ended it "The flaw in my sanity." that was soooooooooo good! excellent job and the best of luck in my contest!!!!
-Steve- -
Wow! This is great!
I love it. It is a wonderful poem.
My favorite part:
"For I can't form words,
Not to aid my argument,
Not to clear away the storms.
The crack in my mind.
The flaw in my sanity."
G/L
~Jess -
Amazing!
Oh wow~ This poem was very well written! Thanks so much for entering my contest! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Where;d you get the idea to write this poem? It's great! Thanks so much again! My favourite lines were :My words are inadequate.
My mind is blank,
Covered over by a blanket,
One which hides logical thought.
I can't explain
Explanations are useless.
I can give you the essence
Of what I feel.
The tip of the iceberg,
But under the surface is hidden.
It's a secret.
Words weakly attempt
To tell this story."
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