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gone

gone
i'm going now, going away
leaving forever,
i will never return,
you can't convince me to stay
going, going, gone.
gone like the wind.
gone like everything good, gone....

Please tell me the truth. If it sucks, I wanna know. If it's great, I want to know more. Be brutal.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    November 21
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    It seems a fairly typical poem until:

    gone like everything good, gone....

    and suddenly everything about the poem changed since it took on a more universal meaning...one that reminds the reader of the transience of their lives.


  • forget my memories
    January 18, 2007

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    i love it even though its short. is amazing. i ushauly dont like really short poems becuase they ushualy dont have enough emotion. but i love this great job.
    ♥sam


  • xx-victorianvampyre
    December 12, 2006
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    YEA

    I luv it luv it U RULE BABIIIII!
    luv ya
    -Fleurcerise