His Soulful Woman
tends to her soul
She loves without boundaries
without levels, with wild abandon
She touches the earth with her hands
feeling the soil, rubbing it on her body
The connection between her and Mother earth
become the fire of life
She feels, she breathes, she loves
Her powers are captivating, sometimes
unknowingly to her, she leaves victims
wondering if they have even met her
Do they even know her? Will they ever really know her?
This Soulful Woman is full of depth,
desire, longing for more
Knowing that there may never be enough
She has become attached to a Soulful Man
Who has lost himself in his love for her
She dances her dance of wanton to keep his
Heart and Soul full of her
His desires have become enmeshed in hers
And he is trying to maintain control of his senses
He may be able to do that for a short period
Then again he seeks the woman that has claimed
His soul, His love, His life,
His Soulful Woman
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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This is definately a mistical enchantment. The words flow like a spell into the very mind. Thanks for sharing. UNt
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Oh prettiful..soulful...woman you~~~~
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lovely write you got here
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Soulful
Just reading your wonderful words again
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The creativity flows in this write. Such intensity of emotion and very alluring. Interesting format opting for the narrative style but it works well. Very nice...alby
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The poem was straight soulful, and it flowed very nicely
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Wonderful
A wonderful story of Love.
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wow!
a powerhouse of a write! I don't know how i missed this one! loved every line, good job poetess!
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Beautiful again
I like the notion of two soul mates finding one another, as you might gather from my poetry. I especially like the line "Who has lost himself in his love for her," because love is really about losing the self. Self replaced by "The other," is an apt description of love.
Another gem.
CaliOkie
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excellent
two souls becoming one this mis what everyone aspires to.you have expressed this feeling of blissful fusion so well.your imagery and use of language are amazing well done.
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Very nicely done!
I enjoyed the read and the music!
May your holidays sparkle and shine!
Merry Christmas!
Maureen
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wow this was great and wrote in taste
love the description
and your word choice
this poem is passion
i love it
and i like it just like you wrote it
no parts better than another
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crazy good
i like the description and the painting you used in describing this woman's passion for life. i really enjoyed the poem.
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I Am Feeling This. You Are An Amazing Poet. You Should Be Published.
I really like this verse because it is so powerful in what it is saying. This describes a woman in any man's eyes. Especially to a man that desires this special woman. You are gifted.
"She feels, she breathes, she loves
Her powers are captivating, sometimes
unknowingly to her, she leaves victims
wondering if they have even met her
Do they even know her? Will they ever really know her?"
This is my other favorite part because it describes a man after he realizes that he has the ultimate woman in his life. Better yet his soul mate. This is wonderful.
"His desires have become enmeshed in hers
And he is trying to maintain control of his senses
He may be able to do that for a short period
Then again he seeks the woman that has claimed
His soul, His love, His life,
His Soulful Woman."
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this poem is beautiful and charming, full of soul within the rapture of paradise. full of elegance of natural emotions...i am glad i read it.
thanks - all the best - sukhdarshan -
I really enjoyed this piece. I like the way it describes a womans and a mans feelings in different prospectives. Great piece. Check me out sometime. - cgirl0410
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This is such an inspiring piece.
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intense... incredible... the melding of the two souls expressed with such clarity - a beautiful and emotional write, for certain!
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The imagery is outstanding! I loved the flow, the last two lines really brought the poem home for me. Very sensual, beautiful and loving! Outstanding!!
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Her heart is full of desire for only one. He has claimed her, wanton soul. Interesting play on words you chose here! Great imagery. Keep penning ~Sie
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Excellent
His desires have become enmeshed in hers
And he is trying to maintain control of his senses
He may be able to do that for a short period
Then again he seeks the woman that has claimed
His soul, His love, His life,
His Soulful Woman
Great ending words for this verse
Well done
Rick
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This is such a beautiful, sensual, deeply written and expressed work of poetry. I loved reading how deep it was with none of the sappy stuff that I write when I try to achieve a poem like this
... I can tell you are a deep poet, I love that, and I really hope to read a new write from you soon Enjoyable read
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Empowering
I found this not only to be a beautiful and soulful write of self expression and love, I picked up on a rather empowering message, one that I think many could use a good dose of, feel, be, love....be truly free for only then will we understand and apprecite the blessings of, and in life. I'm in that kind of mood today anyway! lol Really enjoyed this, absolutely fantastic penning.
*rose*
Ashley
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Unfortunately I have to remove this from the contest because it exceeds the line limit, which is 30.
I definitely encourage you to enter a shorter poem!
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A perfection of a woman. To be soulful is to be whole a completion. YOur poem has great incite and meaning. I thank you for the write.
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I simply had to re-read this poem!!!!!!!. It's words are so captivating. You are a fantastic poet!!!! I am honored to have crossed paths with you and your work!!!!!!!!!!!
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Outstanding!!!!
Your work here is so intriging , full of this mysterious Soulful Woman and her lover .
my favorite line that really caught my attention was ..
"She dances her dance of wanton to keep his
Heart and Soul full of her"
Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Lisa~
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Spectacular!!!
I could feel the expression of deep love and passion in this romantically enchanting poem.
Your words caress the heart and stroke the
soul with fire and desire.
Every good man's desire is to find a wonderful
woman that knows who she is and how to
please her man.
This was passionate and affectionate.
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Stop focusing, this one is complete.
Beautiful and 'soulful' write.
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a beautiful sentiment
so moving and powerful as an expresion of love and caring and something more...the strength of this woman...so remarkable..thank you...PK
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!
The beauty of the earth and the beauty of the love between two souls, they are truly connected in this life.
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this has the wow factor well written xxxxxxxx
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This is an exceptional piece. You have gone one rung up the ladder with this. Three enlightened bunnies for you.
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Interesting...
I like the way this was written.... So expressive. I like the use of victims, made the poem more interesting. Love does wonders and can also do so much harm. I loved the use of soulful! GREAT WORK!!!
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Wild and untamed...as love should be.
I'm curious, and will definitely read more.
...Will
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very NIce, and how beautiful you render this picture with your words. well done
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ahh
This was so beautiful, and descriptive. I really enjoyed it, and the picture fit the poem.
I think my favorite lines must have been
His desires have become enmeshed in hers
And he is trying to maintain control of his senses
it really showed what was felt.
Bravo.
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I cannot get enough
This is just so beautiful! So very thoughtful and thought-provoking. My soul, my very being is touched and enhanced each time I read and re-read Soulful woman. I desire more, much more of Soulful Woman; speak more, write more, feel more and enhance my soul.......
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Brilliant!
This poem is magnificent! It speaks to the
essence of love romance and passion.
A woman is soulful when she is intouch
with her inner person.
As the giver and nurturer of life
her power is limitless. We as men naturally
gravitate to the warmth and tenderness that
is woman. Your poem has great depth and
is intriguing on many levels.
I enjoyed this write a lot
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thoughtfully erotic
A Story of a powerfully erotic woman and an equally powerful man; a verse of their passion for eachother, a passion for life. Just mysterious enough to cause me to desire more...........
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YES! YES! YES!
MMMM God god this touches me. Made me think on my beloved and UNLEASHED the power behind the emotions of this Obsessed romantic heart is reckless abandon. Oh I loved it! Every last line, I LOVED IT! I am dearly moved and as such you are dearly applauded and showered with
This is getting a bookmark!!!!
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Deep and pointed.
Love this poem, that conveys such mysteries from this soul woman, such powers, such delights and such love. An experience that would be unequaled and last a long time. f Jules.
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Absolutely Beautiful
A wonderful write from the soul.so beautifully crafted.Each word a gem.Well done on this amazing write, Ros -
Love without boundaries is indeed a great feeling. The seperation brings all kinds of negative things like envy, jealousy and hatred which make us sullen and start a battle inside which we are never able to understand throughout our life.The longing will be there for some one who is dear to us and to be with them is a desire that do everlasting circles inside the mind. A good poem indeed....Thanks for sharing..bye
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First of all, thanks for you critique. I wanted to read some stuff by you, so here I am.
This is really beautifully crafted. A lot of the lines really stand out to me. "She feels, she breathes, she loves" or "Do they even know here? Will the ever really know her?"
A really good read. Keep chugging.
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Beautiful
Wonderful expression -
SO VERY TOUCHING!
As one shows their love for the other so does that other open and shows their love. When two are in love it is the most beautiful feeling.
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.:Absolutely Cool:.
Hey there Soulful Woman,
Thought that i would pop over here to your page and read a few of your poems...... Wow i just love this poems what a cracker the imagery was beautiful...
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She touches the earth with her hands
feeling the soil, rubbing it on her body
The connection between her and Mother earth
become the fire of life
_____________________________________________....Above is my favourite stanza in this piece wow what powerful imagery; Thank you so much for sharing this with us all.
Timmy S. Edgar © 2006
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Great work..
It is really very powerful expression revealing the strength of the soulful woman and the tenderness here showing the love in this poem is it's another great quality which attracts very much from the beginning to the end as well..The emotions here are flowing in every line with so much passion and the universality of this poem makes this work very touching too..Indeed a beautiful work by the heart of the poet..... -
Beautiful poem. It sounds like she is a lucky woman to have a man who loves her like that. Not only loved but wanted and needed as well. You have penned much love and emotion into this work..Great job.
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Oh yes!
I now wish Mine one thinks this way too. I think he does. Thanks for sharing such a brilliant love piece that enmeshed the desires so well that it has left me numb. It's really beautiful and heartfelt. Very romantic & sensual with the gentle, tender stroke. I simply love it. Thanks for showing your talent to highlight love so divinely beautiful. Thanks for such a brilliant piece.
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This is Awesome
I feel this came from your soul.. Well writen.. And way to go... Hope to read more.. Blessed Be! Green Mother Rose
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Fantastic
I'm speechless! This is extremely good work! the lines flow into each other as though, for lack of a better description a knitted sweater. I love this poem. The uniqueness of the writes pen to capture you in their lyric and hold you their as though spell
bound. No words can describe exactly what is felt by this poems reader. I suppose it is capture but not against your will.
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Oh wow
It took me like half an hour searchign tht contest, going over my notes...lol...then it hit me it might be yours.....
Wow, this is powerful Gaia Woman.... such a man can not sruvive without the soul of the muddied woman who has blessed herself with the swing and sway of Mother Earth.
suc fools would tarry...such a fool would tarry.
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A well written piece that was full of emotion and conjured imagery of soulfull abandonement,pleasure and ease both one's self and with one's lover.I tentatively suggest you may like to look again at the third line from the end,this is not a criticism but this line caught my attention by stopping the flow at both read throughs "then again he is seeks the woman he claims" perhaps I may suggest " then again he has sought the woman he claims" As ever it must be your choice as the author what you prefer,this is your creation and an enjoyable read,well written.Love and light,Yvette
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Oh yes he seeks her. He needs her pure and unconditional love. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
Jeannie
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