Oh how I wish
For wishes to come true
Mine, I know right now
Of the future, I wish to view
No, not to win the lottery
Not to know the outcome of the game
But to see for one brief moment
The life of my burning flame
To know what needs changing
And give my all in what I try
To free my garden of it's weeds
Before it's time to say goodbye
How much more laughter and smiles
I can share with those I love
To be forever in their hearts
Even from the skies above
Oh how I wish upon all wishes
To know where my fate will lay
But no such luck, so till then
I make the most of every day
Author notes
Few will understand
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Oh My Sweet Storm
Oh Hun
What can I really say about this most wonderful piece...It was so heartfelt and sincere...Your heart shines through this piece and it shows me beauty and love that comes from you...
You are one amazing person my sweet friend and I love you dearly
Tes
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Thank you so much Tes I appreciate your comments and wonderful words.
Much love
Storm
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wow this is so touching. leaves me with tears.
what a deep thing to write about, yet you have done it so well. your words are so tender and your write shows lots of love for those you hold dear.
this is an remarkable poem.
God Bless You and yours.
Joyce
p.s. i am glad i found you on this site and i believe all things happen for a reason.
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Thank you so much for your comments and encouraging words. It is so very appreciated.
Storm
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I found myself quietly smiling by the end of this, not so much happy but not sad, positive. What a beautiful wish and thought.
Thank you
I wish you well
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Adrian, thank you. I hope there is some positive in this. I am trying to see all the positive I can with what is going on. Just a need to spill some emotions.
Storm
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Don't wish do!
Life is what you make it sweet lady,
It won't come to you!
Go out and grasp it, fly in the winds of fate and catch it!
Your the butterfly go taste the nectar, no matter how many gardens you have to visit.Before your dreams realise themselves.
So don't ponder! But wander into the unknown, and be never afraid. Because all life painful,or loving, is wonderful. Live for the moment, because usually the moment sometimes lasts longer than you think!
And not in wishes or dreams.
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Thank you Keith. I do everything I can, but as I said in my note, few will understand the true meaning that lies in these words. I appreciate your uplifting message and plan to make the most of everything I can.
Storm
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Wonderful!
Beautifully written, written with such heartfelt sincerity, a communication of the hope within, to "get it right the first time" as it were. Very well done!
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Thank you for your comments, much appreciated.
Storm
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wonderful
Your poem speaks volumes, it is so well written and so true, you have the ability to express your feelings in words and rhyme that amaze me, great job, Blessings John
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Thank you John. Just expressing some pent up emotions. Kind of have to do it every now and then. Appreciate the comments hun.
Storm
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Very beautiful and heartfelt. I wish the same for you. You always give your all in what you do. Your heart is as big as this world, and with all that you have done for so many, you have special angels to guide and watch over you. Keep looking up when things seem the worst, you have much left to do, so put on your steel toed boots and get ready to kick some major butt!! Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie. With encouragement like that, how can I not get out there and kick some major butt?? I truly appreciate your words hun, they mean so much.
Storm
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A most beautiful and sincere piece, my friend! You know I wish you the best of the best...always; this is beautiful
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Thank you Sandy, truly appreciate it.
Storm
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