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If Only- a soul's lament.

If only you could have heard my screams,
you might have slipped out of your dreams.

If only you could have heard my cry,
you might not have left me to die.

If only you could feel my embrace,
you might wipe the tears from your face. 

If only you could feel my kiss,
an angel's blessing,
a devil's gift.   

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I was supposed to be studying for my up and coming two tests (tomorrow) teehee, but i wrote this thing instead. Anything to get away from math and civis, y'know?

Please critique, i guess.

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  • Whenitefallz
    December 6, 2006

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    WHAT A "LOST SOUL" DEAR JOHN LETTER THIS IS!! I CAN VIRTUALLY SEE THE STRESS CIRCLES BENEATH THE EYE.. OR PERHAPS, ONLY IN MY PERCEPTION. SADLY LOVELY NONE THE LESS..