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Bring On Spring

stately old oak tree
leaves stripped by winter's cold wind
bare limbs beg for spring.

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Written May 17th, 2003

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  • Haishao Suikei
    May 20, 2003
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    not bad at all

    Not bad, eh? Vry discriptive, and, as most ancient Haiku tends to be, about nothing of much importance to pople.
    But, it is still important, nonetheless, even if not to people.
    I like it.
    (I LOVE YOU!)


  • Lurie
    May 17, 2003
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    BBBBRRRRRRRRRR Bill!!!!
    Makes me shiver!!! Poor tree....Spring is here at last though!!! For which I am very thankful! I love your KU's Bill...Such wonderful imagery you make me see!!

    Branches stretch heaven~ward,
    seeking warmth from sun...
    Spring has sprung..................Laura
    Edited on May 17, 9:46 p.m. because 'OOOOOPS!'.