If I hate everything about you,
then why do I keep loving you?
Is my love for you strong enough,
to make me forgive your evil deeds?
Why can't I get over you,
even when I date other people?
Maybe I should change,
instead of you.
So here's to you, my love.
Good-bye.
A contest entry
- ~ Shattered Heart? -- Time to Pick up the Pieces!! ~ by Still Standing.
2000 points, ended June 22, 34 entries
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Very simple, yet inspiring. I like the idea you portray of giving up on them ever changing and just moving on yourself. Great!
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much better!
I like this. It fits well with moving on and getting over someone I like this:
Why can't I get over you,even when I date other people?Maybe I should change,instead of you.So here's to you, my love. Good bye
Very powerful. Good luck and thanks for entering!
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great
who's this one about?It was very strong.
sarah
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this is kwl, expresive, ive been in your boat, it will get better =]
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wow short and straight to the point I love this poem very much
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thanx u guys. i appreciate the honesty. i know that it would get better, but when this was put up, i didn't think so. then i talked ot him and he read this and now everythings but to normal between us....almost.
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