I love looking at your face
With such splendor and full of grace
You bring such warmth and stillness in my heart
I love being in your presence
Please stay!, Don't ever depart
I admire the beauty that you create for us to see
My mind roams wild, innocent and free
I enjoy the moments that we share
Your language alone that i hear
I feel your words, they move in me
Until we meet again in this serenity
A contest entry
- ANYTHING !!! (well almost anything!) by Rachael70.
440 points, ended December 25, 2006, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write me a world, write me a rhyme, write me a tale of yours and mine. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 19, 2006, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice
I this poem is you got stright to the point. i like it alot -
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Hey thanks, i am glad you liked it.
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That was good. Short, simple, but straight to the point. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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I know how you mean there... Sometimes we just want that ultimate connection with someone... I have longed for it for a long time but it's very hard to get, indeed. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
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A beautiful poem here, written with a great deal of love and warmth. Very heartfelt. An enjoyable read, all the best in the contests!
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Beautiful Piece
This is a wonderful piece. It is a great write and a really enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
~Majestic Poet
P.S. Sorry my comment is so short I am trying to finish reading and commenting on all of the poems entered into my contest tonight! -
a good uplifting piece here, a smilign poem. i wish that you have good luck in this contests you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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