[I dedicate this to a special lady in my life, one who recently, I let down.]
Tonight,
I leave room for a possibility to love in
my heart. A heart that has been chain-linked
to darkness and once lacked exposure.
I find it funny, though with all seriousness, I
can admit to selfishness, not for the good of myself
coming out of denile, but for the love of
another-
you see. tonight a woman I love threaten
to disown me-
and though her words and meanings among them
may be legit- I find no such interest of
cutting loose ends that will only stress me, yet
hold them tightly, for without shame, I can
admit that they will be the only strings I've
ever held long enough to watch bloom into the
length of a beautiful quilt.
What the future holds, we can never tell;
but what I hope is to hope for a better sense
of being a better man, a bigger man than those
whose disgrace rub off on me.
I see now why she would dare to make me cry;
I am weak in everyway possible-
but now, I am seeing like the bigger man
I hope to be in the future.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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its been awhile, i like this one. its so simple. i hope you reached your goal.
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This is quite lovely and I hope she reads it. Not everyone makes mistakes and then owns up to them. Seeing our own flaws and saying yes, that's me. Beautiful piece of writing.
Desiree
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great meter and flow
after she reads this she will know what a huge guy you are and what a wonderful man she has fallen for. Grow to be that person you strive to be and build that quit with her.
this is beautiful beyond words or adjectives
Tamara
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