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Someone...

All I want is someone,
That one
That special one,
To snuggle with at night,
And cuddle with in the day.
 
Someone to take care of me,
To help me,
And tell me when to stop drinkin'.
 
To tell me when I need my insulin.
 
Someone to be with me when I'm affraid,
To embrace me when I cry,
To laugh with me in times of joy,
And someone I can do the same for.
 
Someone to hold hands with,
Talk about the little nothings with,
And the big somethings too.
 
And when no one's around sneaks kisses with.
 
Someone I can cook for,
Clean for,
Work for,
Live for,
And love.
 
So, where is mine?
Why don't I have a someone?
Why can't I have what I want for once?
 
Because...
It's not in the cards for me. 

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  • Tarja
    October 8, 2007

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    This was very deep... there is so much emotion put into this I can't help but love it. The end... just totally tied it all together.. Very well done.


  • XxXxSilentXxXx
    May 4, 2007
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    Very good, and very true,
    Excellent!

  • Easy Assumption
    March 23, 2007

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    nice

    Simple but so true... the sentiments this captures are definitely the sentiments I feel when in love. I definitely felt my stomach fill with butterflies and my heart flutter a million miles an hour while reading this.
    I like how you begin with "all I want..." You just ask for one simple thing...but it's a complexly simple thing (the irony).
    I'm tempted to try and psychologize...but I'll avoid that here...
    'nuff said. Nice poem.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    January 15, 2007

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    I know it may be hard to believe but it is better to still hope for that someone than to wake up and realize that you have "settled" for just anyone. Hang in there. I happen to believe for every Adam that has a need... there is an Eve. I know it doesn't feel like much comfort on those long, cold nights but it will happen when the time and place are in sync. Until then, stay well my friend.
    ♥ Touchof1der

  • mumma
    December 14, 2006

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    mmm..great piece her yet again..

    your special someone will come to you when you least expect it, ...


  • Ima survivor
    December 6, 2006
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    Perfect.

    I think we all want someone like that, its a special kind of person.


  • Alittle2lost
    December 6, 2006
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    Beautiful

    that's absolutly touching. i love it.

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