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Slippery When Wet



S

L

O

W
RIDE

TAKE IT
E

A

S

Y

She used to rub
Up against
My lamp post
Letting
The yellow-white
(Light)
Cascade
D

O

W

N
Her body

She never leaned
She was master
Of the pole
She never leaned
Herself
Off
Anything

Legs
Perpetually
Bent
She wore
Sheer
Dresses
So she could
Look
Into

Your eyes
Before she
Sucked
Out
Your life

with the warning:

Slippery when wet

She would whisper
It, right before she
Broke
Your
Neck

She was a night stalker
Lamplight her roof
I was the concrete
On which she
Tread

….You Know

THE
R

H

Y

T

H

M

Is
RIGHT…




                    Peace Abel

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  • queenie gold member
    March 3, 2007

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    oh, this is awesome.this is sheer unadulterated poetry.
    orignal,creative and oh so sensuous.you are a true poet and if you didn't already know,this should convince you.


  • Manicmuze
    December 5, 2006
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    Loved it !

    This is fantasic! Very original and kept my interest the entire time, i loved it !
    ~ w