How did this happen? How could she lie?
I know how it looks, but the baby's not mine
I should stand besider her- I just can't trust her
I thought she loved me, I know I loved her
I guess I should sleep, this might be fresh in the morning
I'm still in such shock; bad news- without warning
"Joseph, I'm an angel, sent by God to you.
I know you feel betrayed, but what Mary says is true
She is with child, though she's never been with a man
This child is from God, one coming to save all men
So God is asking you Joseph, to stay with your wife
And one day you'll see, he'll save your life."
I woke with a new peace, and looked to the sun
I never would have predicted what that dream had done
I couldn't wait to see Mary, explain I believed
I'm glad I didn't act in haste, I'm glad I didn't leave
I'm going to be a father! Even though he's not mine
Will I be able to teach him? will I really be fine?
The time has now come, and though the road has been rough
We've gotten through it together, Mary, especially, has been tough
In Bethleham for a census, and now the baby is here too
Staying in a stable, with a cow welcoming "moo"
Not exactly what we had in mind, but we're doing okay
Now hoping to become good parents, taking it day by day.
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STUNNING WRITING. I LOVE THE WHOLE FEEL OF THIS. THIS IS WONDERFUL WORK. THE RHYME AND FLOW WERE SUPERB TOO.
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE.
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thank you
Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. Unfortunately no such women exit. But alas I am old now & have known my share of women. Good luck on your relationship -
Religion
As I guy that went to Catholic school for 9 yrs I have always wondered about this.But I do respect the rights of others & this is one interesting write
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Nice work
What a nice and well written poem...I liked this new perspective from Joseph as well
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hi bethie
loved it!! i'm sure not many ppl consider the emotional turmoil that joseph would have gone through. -
great write i love it. keep it up and never let your talent die.
love the shark
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Captivating
Dear Beth,
My goodness I have been away for awhile. It's nice to return to something new from you, though. This is indeed a wonderful piece of work with good poetic flow. You did a good job of capturing the characters. I notice that your 'significant other' hasn't commented yet (or posted in the last month, for that matter). Someone needs to kick him. I'd volunteer, but the bloke's a good distance away from me. And I find white men with afros a little frightening.
Warmest Regards,
ST
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great
This is very good. I really like it.
Krista
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Bethie, wow you have done it again, just a small typo though with Didn't. I love it, It has a really great rhyme scheme to it. Fabulous.
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wonderful...have you seen teh Nativity Sotry? I've always loved thinking of the Christmas story form the PERSONAL point of fview...and Joseph has always been one of my favourite characters...I think you caught his turmoil well there in the first measure. A wonderful write, a joy to read, and the true meaning of this time of year
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WOW!!!!! When i clicked into this i thought oh no another i want a guy but can't have him poem(not that those are bad just too common) good write here. I think with out that angel he would have left just like i would have but good write here and keep it up
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great idea
i loved your idea of writing about joseph's side of the story. you did an awesome job with it to, portraying his confusion and anger at first, but then after the dream his obedient submission to God's will and his contentment with what he's been given. i really enjoyed reading this one!
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