What color
What shape
What size am I?
I can't tell
I just can't wait
I want to know
How gentle
How Loving
How soft am I?
Let me know now
Tell be who I am
Tell me who I will be
Am I young
Am I old?
God help me
I don't know
I can't decide for myself
So don't tell me I can
I'm lost
In the dark
And I need to know who I am
So tell me
Please
Give me a hint
Ryme me a Ryme
Sing me a song.
Light me a lantern
Lead me along
Give me hope
God knows I need it
and give me a path
But most of all
Give me an identity
One I can hold
Give me a purpose
to keep on going
Love me
Hate me
Hold me
Push me
I don't care
as long as you make me
Author notes
Longest poem I've ever wrote
A contest entry
- ANYTHING !!! (well almost anything!) by Rachael70.
440 points, ended December 25, 2006, 37 entries
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Comments
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Nice Piece
This was a great read. I love the feeling of a person who is just finding them self. Even tho the feeling of trying to find themselves is not a good feeling at all. Good luck in the contest.
~Majestic Poet
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