Mom i miss you
please come home
you and i can become best friends
we share a bond
you made me happy
where are you
A contest entry
- Deep emotions by Ntagatf.
500 points, ended April 3, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Remembering Someone Special by SilverRain.
750 points, ended November 9, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very short write but any emotions are locked inside, I don't know your situation but I can tell you love and miss your mother very much. Great write best of luck to you in my contest
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layena,this poem is very good and it makes me sad at the same time.hang in there layena!
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i love it. very painful and deep. hang in there.
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short cool, thanx guys
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Sad but good I liked it. Moms are good and you miss them alot
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i know you miss her because i had a friend sitiation like this
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i love it
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sad
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