Yeah, they all went up there
Grass was so lime green
Hurt more to leave shoes on
All went up by the hand full
Yup bludgers filling in the seats
We knew the grass was softer
Kicking back in the dirt
Slits of sun through fingers
Trees planting their own seeds
In the earth, in the minds
Making tracks of their own
Our own footprints in time
Please tell me what you think
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Damn it, you're writing is getting better and better every time I read a new poem. It's so unfair! And when I read your syn..I've forgotten that word-But you know the thingy about your story, I was like WOW, thats awesome. Not just because the plot sounds good but the words you used to describe it were excellent! Can't wait for more stories and poetry:0)
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This is great Jo! You are so descriptive and your writing tecniques never cease to amaze me.. You can write about anything and everything, from peaceful hippy-like wonders, to angry hateful writes. My point being Jo, is that you are amazing with everything you write. And no matter what style it is, what it contains, (unless hate-mail about me ) I will enjoy it. And you know it Homie!!
Love ya always!!
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Yo Jo, this is sweet. Very hippie style lol, Its wonderful!! and I can very much picture this in my mind...especially you doing it hahaha!! welldone on an awesome write man, tee hee
Three claps for you!!
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