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This Precious Gift



This precious gift I'm given
A way to look inside and find
This precious gift I'm given

This breath thats full of life
This precious gift I'm given
Like food and water
Sun and air
This precious gift of breath
I'm given
Each precious breath I'm given





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  • Providence
    December 6, 2006

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    Like a ancient song, this precious breath we take is indeed the gift of life. Marvelous, Tara.

    This inspiration of gratitude is truly a gift to us all!

    Namaste!
    Marianne


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 5, 2006
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    WONDERFUL!

    Oh my Tara Wonderful poem! Our most precious gift is the gift of life, to be able to breathe the fresh air and smell the many different aroma's of life.


  • suseann
    December 5, 2006
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    I can relate as I sit reading this I'm taking a nebulizer breathing treatment. Ha! Yet somehow,I feel the gift referred to in this fine spiritual piece,means something much deeper and less obvious.Beautiful write.~Suseann


  • mzladyt
    December 5, 2006

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    pretty good

    I guess none of really think about something like this. You did a great job bringing it to my attention today. Thanks


  • transcendental baby gold member
    December 5, 2006
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    This sounds like a song or a chant ... it's lovely Tara. Noone knows how precious each breath is better than you


  • Watuwant silver member
    December 5, 2006
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    A breath of fresh air, Tara! 'Tis the gift to share, and you do.
    peace
    doug

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