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On The Road(Senyru)

accelerating
car up to the speed limit
exhilarating.

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Written May 16th, 2003

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  • Billbard silver member
    May 17, 2003
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    Laura.Thanks for comment.Glad I had my seat belt buckled.


  • Lurie
    May 17, 2003
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    OHHHHHHHH LOL you sound like my hubby!!!!
    Has that need for speed!!!!! LOL

    Statey parked behind the big sign
    petal to the metal,
    red and blue lights flash    !!!! Hehehehehe ~Laura