Open up your little eyes
and see what is around you
open up your wonderful world
and realize what you're doing
Open up those fucking thoughts
make me read your mind
make me understand what inside
and why you aren't kind
Open up-
all I asks for
Close when bullied at
you teach me how to be such a wimp
and I'll teach you how to see
Open up-
our mindless screaming
Open up-
your awesome fight
Listen!
open up your freaking mind
Let me see what hides inside your boyish mind
Let me see why
Let me see how
Author notes
It's kind of a lyric, I guess.. So you can sing it! yeey! give it a shot..!
buuhh..
there's this boy in my class.. who's teasing me over internet all the time, because he thinks it's cool.. but in class he doesn't
Enjoy
A contest entry
- Bullied but not beaten by ugly-hated.
300 points, ended December 5, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well.. What do you think, heh?
Comments
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Freaking A!!!
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This is a marvellous poem, im glad that people are actually entering
just remember, dont be beaten, fight back it works.
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This is a good write. I like how you give a picture of who you talk to. The last couple of lines:
Listen!
open up your freaking mind
Let me see what hides inside your boyish mind
Let me see why
Let me see how
- those are some powerful words. Although, I think this whole poem is powerful. Good luck in the contest, and god bless.
B.
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