Look in the broken mirror
At what you’ve done
Cringe inside, hate yourself
Turn around
Look at the bed
What’s lyin’ there
Stained forever
Take what you want
From me
Leave me behind
To die
Throw me stones
Make me bleed
Inside
Can’t turn back time
Even though you try
Can’t erase, can’t redo
Drive a stake
Into the hate
Spilling out
Stained forever
Take what you want
From me
Leave me behind
To die
Throw me stones
Make me bleed
Inside
Take what you want
From me
Leave me behind
To die
Throw me stones
Make me bleed
Inside
Make me bleed
Inside
Inside
Bleed inside
Bleed Inside
A contest entry
- Write me a world, write me a rhyme, write me a tale of yours and mine. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 19, 2006, 34 entries
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Comments
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Nicely written... I like the repeat of the verse with take what you want from me, it gives a good effect for the type of song you are writing. This is dark and painful, and I can feel the agony of the person whom you are writing in the persona off... Maybe as i've been hurt and want to turn back time myself. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
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