I thought when two hurt people meet
They lick each others wounds
we did exactly that
You gave me back my life
gave me the dreams i left undreamt long ago
gave me lifebreath, not mine, it was yours
The only promise that we ever made
we will never hurt each other
living life with you
was my dream come true
those ten months and two days
they sum up my life, past, present and future
you gave so much and so much you took away
I learnt how to live from you,
m living, still
but a void screams
You took back those borrowed breaths
You took back those dreams, you took back me
i dont have the strength to stand up again
to look in people's eyes, to trust them,
everynight spent,
spent literally.
Nothing with me, nothing by me
This nothing, this void keeps engulfing you in me.
... and i refuse to live without you in me...
Author notes
have not written anything for last one year, i know the poem is incoherent n pretty bad an attempt, but it was my last attempt to .... dont know attempt to do what....
A contest entry
- Losing her/him by Atrophya.
400 points, ended December 22, 2006, 35 entries
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beautiful.i know what that feels like.sometimes you get so tired of being hurt by being screwed over by love that, you just want to give up and stop trying, you dont want to believe anymore.im sorry for you and i hope someday, things will brighten for you.great write.
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thnx, didnt c ur comment on my poem.
thnx for taking out time to read it n putting ur sweet comment
take care
regards
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I know this, when everything has become exhausted!!
This piece here speaks on a trillion levels for me, it is just that good!!
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thnx
i stopped writing as i m struggling to live, writing is some fond memory now
wrote after so long...
thnx for taking out time n reading it
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