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A Mystery

Missing image
Thoughts of nothing
go through my aching head
visions of darkness
consume me

The future is past
the past obsolete
never here, nor there
or ever to be

Memories try
to be seen
but the mind
blocks them

Have I forgotten
the sadness
or locked it away
within a hollow grave

Colors of brightness
disappear
greys and black
barely seen

A life forgotten
the love just a lie
perhaps it was a dream
my visions....a mystery

~who am I~

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Hmm, what does it all mean?

It just all came out, no editing. Again, what does it mean? May come back to post more for this.

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  • owlishhunter
    January 18, 2007
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    Another great write, and pretty profound! Great, I like it alot!


  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    December 4, 2006
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    another nice write, keep up the great work


  • bird-mad girl
    December 4, 2006

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    I loved this mummy! It makes you think with its profound words and emotions. I think I could relate to this a lot [if I'm understanding this correctly] Is it about visions of a past life? Because I think I had a few of those over the summer and I'm planning on writing a story about it

    I love you mummy, your words are enchanting.

    always && forever,
    ~Kendal


  • Theater Of Dreams
    December 4, 2006

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    Your journey begins.

     Have you found yourself in unfamiliar places in thought as well as where you are? Don't fret- you will find your way and become strong. What we have been is what we are...

      In the time you are lost...remember, where you have been.

    -Always...

    Smile


  • goddesskevauna
    December 4, 2006
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    Beautiful sis!

    Got me! What does it mean? I suppose that's why life is called a mystery. I don't know. I don't think I'm making any sense. Love you sis!

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