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now you care...
now you want to be there

well its to late..
im gone.

as my screams of joy fill the air
your heart will bleed
wanting me, needing my laughter

as you see my hidden secrets.
my one joy you've never realized;
the real me.
you will regret it.

then shunn me away agian.
leaving me another false bruise
another lie, another night i cry
waking up to another day
with one more rose bleeding wound
eating me alive
creating a gapeing whole inside my soul.

you want to know the real me?
pretend you care,
put on another show.
please id be delighted to see.
go ahead amuse me.


now heres me,
something you thought id never be.....


someone youll never see.... false pretense.

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  • again very well writeen keep them up.


  • XEmoxPenguinX
    August 19, 2007
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    Wow

    That's soooo powerful! I really really like it.... I think like this sooo much...


  • lovely nightmare
    December 7, 2006

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    this is a really good write. i'm trying to think of a good review but i'm tired and its not really working. i liked this alot, although i thinked shun might have only one n? i could be wrong though. anyways, this was really good..it sounds like like i cant think of anything better to say. which i cant oh well.


  • MetalHouse III
    December 4, 2006
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    I love you baby...I love you so much


    • the affluent poor
      December 6, 2006
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      again with the baby business lol...

      apologies--i love you dahling. screw the parentals...BUT respect them. honor them. someday you'll get what i'm talking about and you'll thank me ;] i love you.

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